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Something so right – chapter nine
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Bette ended the kiss and stroked Tina’s hair
“Wow “ Bette muttered “ For a beginner you are good “
“You are getting smoother “
Bette hugged Tina closer and they continued walking
“You don’t have any doubts ?”
Tina shook her head “No. I guess the only thing that had held me back has been that I have not met a woman that I wanted to be with. Meeting you has really crystallised my mind – I know that all the feelings that I have been suppressing are my real feelings – I am crazy for you “
“I am crazy for you “ Bette replied honestly “I didn’t know I could feel this way “
“That makes two of us “ Tina replied
“ I guess there are going to be times when the newness of this will make things hard “
Tina nodded “I pride myself on being an independent woman. I know that we will both need our own time and space but I do want to give this relationship every chance to succeed “
Bette smiled – Tina’s independence of spirit was one of the things that did make the success of the relationship more likely. Bette hated feeling penned in a relationship – she liked that Tina had her own life and held her own opinions and they could argue about all sorts of things.
Bette released Tina’s hand and slipped her arm round her waist – that brought them much closer and felt good. Tina lent closer and kissed Bette on the cheek.
“You just turn me on “
“That’s a good sign if you are planning on applying to be a lesbian “
Tina laughed
“I was hoping that the endorsement of the sexiest lesbian in LA would count for a lot when I applied “
“I might have to apply certain stringent criteria “
Tina raised an eyebrow
“And what might that involve ?”
“When I think about it I will let you know “
Tina was silent for a few seconds – she stopped and looked at Bette
“Just so as you know I will do ANYTHING to become a lesbian “
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Always the Drama Queen. But in a good way. BTW, you didn’t answer my question about choosing the name of “Ella” for B & T’s baby in TLWing.
Azmama – sorry – i meant to drop you a PM. if Jennifer’s daughter is called Ella then it really is a coincidence. i have been planning this baby story for a couple of years and she was always going to be called Ella. it proves great minds think alike !! -i didn’t know about it until you told me Ally x
I’ve loved all your stories, Ally – but this one is truly my favourite, and it does prove that some things are worth waiting for… ;-)A very happy New Year to you!
ah very good…he doesn’t have a chance…no way jose…more please AllyHappy New Year 2 u 2
Damn that Eric!!! Can’t he take a hint! What’s wrong with him!!! Anyway Ally, thanks for the quick post!!! I adore this story. It’s the one I always look for. I was thinking, with all the fan fic awards, they should have a category devoted solely to B&T beginning stories, you would clean up…just my thought! Thanks for the post!!! Happy 2008!!!
This is one of my favorites at the moment. So sweet. But I wonder how they will handle the ex-boyfriend. Particularly how Tina will handle him at work. Hopefully she isn’t going to let him think there is another chance. Hope that there is another chapter soon.
Doesn’t sound like Mr. Man has much of a chance. Very poor timing on his part as Tina’s already signed the contract for the other team. If Tina’s smart she’ll turn the volume down on both the ringer and the answering machine and have her virginal way with Bette.
Well you certainly have started the new year off with a bang. Great chapter…that Eric, he never seems to take no for an answer in anyone’s stories!
Eric needs to go post haste.I keep falling in love with this story.
Eric needs to go AWAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
it’s very sweet that bette is opening up to tina and learning to relax a little. tina is definitely good for bette! please make ERIC GO to a distant land???
Great chapter. Love the kissing!
You clearly have a niche in writing Bette and Tina beginnings. This one is brilliant. I’ve been reading your stories long enough to know that things can be going smoothly, then you lower the boom, drama queen!! PPS
Not nice to leave us like that my friend lol. That was great and love to see they kiss, that was lovely. Hope you take eric out of the pic soon. Please post more, thanks!
Bette and Tina are so sweet and it is fun to read about them falling in love. However, the end part from Eric sounds potentially scary to our couple.
brilliantly done…i am so hooked…
I can’t help it..just need to let you now again that I’m so delighted everytime I see post from you Ally. You are just an amazing writer…and lovin how you play Bette and Tina. Just crazy about B&T beginnings and you never fail. Its just amazing! I can never get enough of your stories…TLW, LAP and AYNIL…now with Something So Right…just amazing…it’s like i’m on a first date everytime i read…im so lovin it!!!
I hope Tina wont get scared again and they continue this sweet making out moments. Hey Ally, in one word – Fabulous!!
As always wonderful Ally, you are doing a great job with thses two, looking forward for the next one.thanks
Oh no the man!!!! get rid of him quickly…great stuff pps. Happy new year.
I love your story. Please continue as soon as you can.
a starter or a sweet. hmmmm?????? what would i go for?? not ice cream for dinner, my mom would soooo disapprove. thx.