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    Something so right – chapter nine

    Story written on January 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    The picnic and more kissing

     

     

    “Nothing will stop me being with you though Tina – I care for you very much “

     

    There was still something that was holding Bette back from saying love. She knew the fault was with her – she knew that they were three words that she rarely uttered and even less heard from anyone who mattered to her. Melvin – she didn’t remember her father ever saying it and she didn’t have that sort of relationship with her sister. She had been in love with a woman at college but she had been too immature and afraid to use the L word. It was a emotional problem that hadn’t seemed to matter – — but now it did – now she was in love with this beautiful blonde – she had fallen in love with a woman who she had only kissed a few times. She needed to learn to tell Tina her feelings – or at least explain to her why her emotions were so locked away in a deep and very dark vault.

     

    “I know you do Bette – I feel the same way – and I know that its scary “

     

    “We will be okay “ Bette said – she wasn’t going to let the ghosts of her past harm the potential of a loving and long term relationship with Tina. Tina was the woman who was going to be the motivation for her to step up her game

     

     

    They were soon heading back in Bette’s car with the picnic hamper in the back of the car. Tina had retrieved a napkin and was eating an egg cress sandwich

     

    “You sure you don’t want a bite ?”

     

    “No thanks – you really do have a good appetite “

    “I do – I work hard when I am at the gym “

    “We never did go for that run “

    “How about tomorrow afternoon and them I will cook for us ?”

    Bette smiled “You will cook for me ? – I have been hinting at that for long enough. I never saw someone’s kitchen with more well used cookbooks “

     

    “I am not a naturally good cook but I can follow a recipe and add my own touches to it – what do you like ?”

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    2. Azmama – sorry – i meant to drop you a PM. if Jennifer’s daughter is called Ella then it really is a coincidence. i have been planning this baby story for a couple of years and she was always going to be called Ella. it proves great minds think alike !! -i didn’t know about it until you told me Ally x

    3. I’ve loved all your stories, Ally – but this one is truly my favourite, and it does prove that some things are worth waiting for… ;-)A very happy New Year to you!

    5. Damn that Eric!!! Can’t he take a hint! What’s wrong with him!!! Anyway Ally, thanks for the quick post!!! I adore this story. It’s the one I always look for. I was thinking, with all the fan fic awards, they should have a category devoted solely to B&T beginning stories, you would clean up…just my thought! Thanks for the post!!! Happy 2008!!!

    6. This is one of my favorites at the moment. So sweet. But I wonder how they will handle the ex-boyfriend. Particularly how Tina will handle him at work. Hopefully she isn’t going to let him think there is another chance. Hope that there is another chapter soon.

    7. Doesn’t sound like Mr. Man has much of a chance. Very poor timing on his part as Tina’s already signed the contract for the other team. If Tina’s smart she’ll turn the volume down on both the ringer and the answering machine and have her virginal way with Bette.

    8. Well you certainly have started the new year off with a bang. Great chapter…that Eric, he never seems to take no for an answer in anyone’s stories!

    11. it’s very sweet that bette is opening up to tina and learning to relax a little. tina is definitely good for bette! please make ERIC GO to a distant land???

    13. You clearly have a niche in writing Bette and Tina beginnings. This one is brilliant. I’ve been reading your stories long enough to know that things can be going smoothly, then you lower the boom, drama queen!! PPS

    14. Not nice to leave us like that my friend lol. That was great and love to see they kiss, that was lovely. Hope you take eric out of the pic soon. Please post more, thanks!

    17. I can’t help it..just need to let you now again that I’m so delighted everytime I see post from you Ally. You are just an amazing writer…and lovin how you play Bette and Tina. Just crazy about B&T beginnings and you never fail. Its just amazing! I can never get enough of your stories…TLW, LAP and AYNIL…now with Something So Right…just amazing…it’s like i’m on a first date everytime i read…im so lovin it!!!

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