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    Something so right – chapter nine

    Story written on January 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Author Notes:

    The picnic and more kissing

     

    Her voice was lower and she was looking much more confident that she had since the kiss.

    Bette loved that about Tina – she seemed very strong once she had made a decision. She kissed Tina on the lips loving the way the blonde tasted and loving how soft her lips were. When she ended the kiss she looked around – the weather looked like it might be very different in about an hour with black clouds starting to roll in from the ocean

     

    “I think we should head back – the clouds are starting to gather – we don’t want a soaking “

     

    Tina looked at where Bette was indicating with her eyes – she nodded

     

    “Do you still want to go to the movies ?”

     

    “What would you like to do ?”

     

    Tina shrugged “I want to kiss you senseless – anything that allows me to do that “

     

    “Its good to see that you are so keen “

     

    Tina smiled “ I am VERY keen “

     

    “We can talk about it in the car – there’s a lot of food left – we can share it out “

     

    Tina nodded and they slowly walked out of the water and headed back along the beach holding hands

     

    “There are people who are repulsed by what we are doing – just holding hands like this “

    “They should mind their own business “

     

    “Its something that you are going to have to get used to – there will be times when we can’t hold hands. I am proud of who I am – I am proud of my sexuality but I also don’t think there is any point in making trouble by advertising my relationships “

    “You are not a hand holding gal ?”

     

    “I am – but I am also a private person. I don’t enjoy being the person people gossip about “

     

    “Bit ironic given your reputation “

     

    “I know – its not lost on me. But I am proud of having you as my girlfriend”

     

    “I am proud of having you as my girlfriend – I do understand that there is still a lot of bigots in this society. “

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    2. Azmama – sorry – i meant to drop you a PM. if Jennifer’s daughter is called Ella then it really is a coincidence. i have been planning this baby story for a couple of years and she was always going to be called Ella. it proves great minds think alike !! -i didn’t know about it until you told me Ally x

    3. I’ve loved all your stories, Ally – but this one is truly my favourite, and it does prove that some things are worth waiting for… ;-)A very happy New Year to you!

    5. Damn that Eric!!! Can’t he take a hint! What’s wrong with him!!! Anyway Ally, thanks for the quick post!!! I adore this story. It’s the one I always look for. I was thinking, with all the fan fic awards, they should have a category devoted solely to B&T beginning stories, you would clean up…just my thought! Thanks for the post!!! Happy 2008!!!

    6. This is one of my favorites at the moment. So sweet. But I wonder how they will handle the ex-boyfriend. Particularly how Tina will handle him at work. Hopefully she isn’t going to let him think there is another chance. Hope that there is another chapter soon.

    7. Doesn’t sound like Mr. Man has much of a chance. Very poor timing on his part as Tina’s already signed the contract for the other team. If Tina’s smart she’ll turn the volume down on both the ringer and the answering machine and have her virginal way with Bette.

    8. Well you certainly have started the new year off with a bang. Great chapter…that Eric, he never seems to take no for an answer in anyone’s stories!

    11. it’s very sweet that bette is opening up to tina and learning to relax a little. tina is definitely good for bette! please make ERIC GO to a distant land???

    13. You clearly have a niche in writing Bette and Tina beginnings. This one is brilliant. I’ve been reading your stories long enough to know that things can be going smoothly, then you lower the boom, drama queen!! PPS

    14. Not nice to leave us like that my friend lol. That was great and love to see they kiss, that was lovely. Hope you take eric out of the pic soon. Please post more, thanks!

    17. I can’t help it..just need to let you now again that I’m so delighted everytime I see post from you Ally. You are just an amazing writer…and lovin how you play Bette and Tina. Just crazy about B&T beginnings and you never fail. Its just amazing! I can never get enough of your stories…TLW, LAP and AYNIL…now with Something So Right…just amazing…it’s like i’m on a first date everytime i read…im so lovin it!!!

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