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    Something so right – chapter one

    Story written on November 30, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette heads out on a Friday night

     

    “Sounds like a plan to me “ Shane agreed “ It will be good just to dance and drink “

    “Come on you two -you cannot do that “

     

    Bette raised an eyebrow at Shane

     

    “Why not Alice – I have had a shit of a week. I just want to drink myself to oblivion and have some laughs – why can’t I do that ?”

     

    “Because- well because this club expects you to pick one of them and take her to heaven -to lay on the old Porter magic “

     

    “My wand is weary “ Bette replied

     

    “Come on Shane – you want to take a woman home tonight “

    Shane shrugged “ I could do either and not mind – why are you so keen that Bette and I score “

     

    “Because – well not for me – but for these women “

     

    “You make them sound like a pack of lemmings” Bette replied

     

    “Well – now you mention it – oh wow – look “

     

    Bette and Shane turned to where Alice was pointing

     

    “What “

     

    “The brunette “

     

    “Which one ?”

     

    “Standing at the bar – I know her face – where from ?”

    Bette shook her head and returned to her beer.

     

    “No – come on Bette – you have a good brain for faces. Fuck me – she’s freaking gorgeous “

     

    Bette decided that it was better to humour Alice. She glanced round and looked at the slim brunette. Shane looked across as well and regarded the woman

     

     

    “She’s a tennis player “ Bette said “ Not a great one – Danya something or other. She played in a match against Serena Williams last year. It was Williams first game back in a year – after the operation on her knee. “

    “What was the result ? “

     

    “Tanked 6-0, 6-1. She lost a service game by serving nothing but double faults. She just froze – I felt sorry for her “

     

    “Since when did you feel sorry for a loser ?” Shane challenged

     

     

    “She was trying hard enough – I am not a total ogre. If someone is really trying then they have my support. Its people who piss their talent away – that annoys me. Not Danya – Dana – that’s it “

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    1. Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.

    2. I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS

    5. I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.

    14. Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love

    15. Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!

    24. hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)

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