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Something so right – chp 91
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“Oh Bette – I’m coming – Aggghh !!! “
Bette stopped as Tina’s orgasm washed over her – she held onto her lover in case she should slip.
“Oh God – Bette – oh God – that was fantastic “
Bette kissed Tina on the lips “I love you “
“I love you more “ Tina replied “Oh God that was amazing “
“Lots more of those available for the right mistress “
Tina opened her eyes and smiled “Do you think we can take the whole week off – I might not be able to walk soon “
“If you are lucky “ Bette said laughing
“I am lucky – lucky to have found you “
They kissed – Bette smiled at her “I could spend forever just watching water fall on your body”
“I know you appreciate it “
“I do – it’s a great sight “
“You want to wash me and then I’ll wash you – then we’ll see about getting dirty all over again”
“Pleasure “ Bette said as she reached for the shower gel and the sponge.
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Tina was lazily licking Bette’s nipple. They had made love several times and were now lying on their bed being lazy and chatting. Occasionally one of them would touch or kiss or caress the other but their passion had subsided and now they were just enjoying the feeling of comfort that two long term lovers can enjoy.
“This is wonderful Bette “ Tina looked up
“I agree “
“Men don’t get how great it is to just lie in silence and just feel so comfortable being with your lover”
“Men are not a subject I know much about “ Bette admitted “By the way what you were doing was good “
Tina switched her attention to the other breast and sucked at it and teased the nipple with her tongue. Finally she moved up the bed so she could kiss Bette on the lips
“You think we could just lie here for the rest of the day ?” Bette asked
“Do you want to ?”
“It would be nice “
“We are both hungry though “
“Order a take away – I’ll pay as my continued penance for you beating me in the race “
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Maybe rare, but sizzling.
WoWWWWW!! and Thanks for the heat in the foggies and freezing day in Chicago. :)
I’m with the others in not trusting Elizabeth. She comes across very overbearing and intrusive, not to mention her creepy, stalker tendencies. She makes Melvin look like the good parent…yikes! As for the NC-17, feel free to describe each day of Tina’s dominance. So glad you’re back posting!!
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
That was great and hot, they are wonderful. Elizabeth need to back off a little and let Bette breath and have time with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
okay what does bette’s mom really want? :)PPS
I think meeting Hannah may shed a little light. And when is Bette going to beat Melvin senseless for hiding all this info? Thanks for posting!
Yes Wow! Wow! Wow! What a post all right. Thank you for this story. So so loving it.
WOW!! What a post to wake up to so early in the morning. Elizabeth is coming on a little strong. I wonder does she have something up her sleeve?I would be a little annoyed and curiousas to why she’s being so pushy. Love this story and all you write. PPVVS
It does bother me that Elizabeth is being a little pushy and coming on too strong right now. I’m not sure that I trust her, but I’m interested to see how things develop and how their dinner goes. Thanks for the NC17! What a way to wake up this morning, and from one of my favorite writers! PPS
“the heat they were going to generate could accidentally defrost the fridge” – love it! Elizabeth intrigues me, what is she up to?! PPS!
At least they conserve water by showering together, cause they may be responsible for some of the wildfires plaguing LA these days.
As the saying is, Elizabeth “so sticks than the burdock.” :o)
I’ll raise my glass to that too. Cheers! Thanks for the update.
I agree with trecelovinit, there is something about Elizabeth that is making me feel uneasy. I hope Elizabeth doesn’t make Melvin look like a saint. Tina will rip Elizabeth’s head off if she as so much makes Bette shed a tear. Awesome update.
Terrific!!!! That was sexy and hot!!! Elizabeth will back off somewhat now. Thx.
Hey Ally, You always keep the physical side of Bette and Tina’s realtionship fresh and exciting. Their need for each other was immediate while the pay-off was so torturously slow that eveyone was due to explode. Good to have Bette and Tina so passionate in their carnal relationship. This cements their union at every turn. The heat between them was intense and I am surprised that the shower didn’t just evaporate when they entered. Now could we have Tina returning the favour as the show mainly had Bette was the giver. I want to have the tables turned. OK so Bette is the slave but I believe handcuffs were mentioned and shouldn’t Ti be teasing her sexual minion. Please make it so and make it soon. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m like Tina and still think there’s something that’s not quite right with Elizabeth. I hope for Bette’s sake it isn’t something major. Sooo happy you’re posting again!
WOW!!! Another wonderful update Ally!!! I do hope Elizabeth is not up to something. Thank you
Great post. I”m glad Bette has her priorities straight. Even though she has always longed for a relationship with her mother she knows that her relationship with Tina is the primary one. Hopefully Elizabeth will keep that in my too.