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Something so right – chp 91
“You don’t have to “
“Don’t mind. Though food isn’t as wonderful as you and I lying here like this “
“What time is it ?”
Bette reached across and picked her watch up “4”
“We stripped off within about five minutes of getting home and we’ve been either making out or just lying here talking and kissing ever since. That’s a great three hours “
“It is “ Bette agreed. She sighed “I just love being here like this. You were right what you said in the car – we haven’t spent enough time together “
Tina moved so she could gently kiss Bette’s neck – even though they had both had three orgasms each she was beginning to come around to the notion that she might be gently talked in having sex again. Just as she was moving slowly downwards with gentle deliberation the bedside phone rang.
“Ignore it “ Bette said “The answer phone will pick it up”
Tina was more than happy to ignore everything short of a major earthquake. Tina returned back to what she had been doing before the phone rang. She was just about to put her mouth around a nipple when a voice came out of the answer phone
“Hello Bette, Tina – are you there – I am just pulling into your street – I see your car is there. Just brought you both a present. You must be both shattered. See you in a few minutes “
There was a silence – Tina looked at Bette who had a look on her face that she couldn’t quite fathom.
“That’s fucked that up “ Bette said
Tina nodded
“We can pretend we are out “ Tina suggested
“We could but do you want to feel as guilty as you did this morning ?”
“Not especially “ Tina reluctantly pulled away from Bette
“I don’t like this Ti “
“I know – as I said – its early days but we need to put some boundaries in place”
Bette swung her legs round and rubbed her face. She was unbelievable grateful that Tina was being so understanding. Her fear was that maybe she wouldn’t always be – that truly scared Bette. Not even for her mother who she had craved all her life would she put her relationship with Tina at risk. She looked at the blonde – the woman who had changed her life in every way that was positive. Bette got up
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Maybe rare, but sizzling.
WoWWWWW!! and Thanks for the heat in the foggies and freezing day in Chicago. :)
I’m with the others in not trusting Elizabeth. She comes across very overbearing and intrusive, not to mention her creepy, stalker tendencies. She makes Melvin look like the good parent…yikes! As for the NC-17, feel free to describe each day of Tina’s dominance. So glad you’re back posting!!
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
That was great and hot, they are wonderful. Elizabeth need to back off a little and let Bette breath and have time with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
okay what does bette’s mom really want? :)PPS
I think meeting Hannah may shed a little light. And when is Bette going to beat Melvin senseless for hiding all this info? Thanks for posting!
Yes Wow! Wow! Wow! What a post all right. Thank you for this story. So so loving it.
WOW!! What a post to wake up to so early in the morning. Elizabeth is coming on a little strong. I wonder does she have something up her sleeve?I would be a little annoyed and curiousas to why she’s being so pushy. Love this story and all you write. PPVVS
It does bother me that Elizabeth is being a little pushy and coming on too strong right now. I’m not sure that I trust her, but I’m interested to see how things develop and how their dinner goes. Thanks for the NC17! What a way to wake up this morning, and from one of my favorite writers! PPS
“the heat they were going to generate could accidentally defrost the fridge” – love it! Elizabeth intrigues me, what is she up to?! PPS!
At least they conserve water by showering together, cause they may be responsible for some of the wildfires plaguing LA these days.
As the saying is, Elizabeth “so sticks than the burdock.” :o)
I’ll raise my glass to that too. Cheers! Thanks for the update.
I agree with trecelovinit, there is something about Elizabeth that is making me feel uneasy. I hope Elizabeth doesn’t make Melvin look like a saint. Tina will rip Elizabeth’s head off if she as so much makes Bette shed a tear. Awesome update.
Terrific!!!! That was sexy and hot!!! Elizabeth will back off somewhat now. Thx.
Hey Ally, You always keep the physical side of Bette and Tina’s realtionship fresh and exciting. Their need for each other was immediate while the pay-off was so torturously slow that eveyone was due to explode. Good to have Bette and Tina so passionate in their carnal relationship. This cements their union at every turn. The heat between them was intense and I am surprised that the shower didn’t just evaporate when they entered. Now could we have Tina returning the favour as the show mainly had Bette was the giver. I want to have the tables turned. OK so Bette is the slave but I believe handcuffs were mentioned and shouldn’t Ti be teasing her sexual minion. Please make it so and make it soon. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m like Tina and still think there’s something that’s not quite right with Elizabeth. I hope for Bette’s sake it isn’t something major. Sooo happy you’re posting again!
WOW!!! Another wonderful update Ally!!! I do hope Elizabeth is not up to something. Thank you
Great post. I”m glad Bette has her priorities straight. Even though she has always longed for a relationship with her mother she knows that her relationship with Tina is the primary one. Hopefully Elizabeth will keep that in my too.