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Soul Mates – Chapter 4
"Hidin’ maybe . . lost even but never gone" Bette said with a smile that never reached her eyes.
Tina didn’t say anything, she couldn’t because she didn’t trust herself enough to speak. She just watched as the brunette climbed into her truck and shut the door, glancing at Tina through the side mirror before driving off.
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Tina stood on the beautifully polished wrap around porch in front of an even more beautiful estate. She rang the bell a few seconds earlier and was not waiting nervously for someone to answer the door.
She looked to her left at the swing that was gently swaying at the other end of the porch. She smiled softly, remembering the fond memories of warm summer days with her friends and that very swing. Things were so simple back then, there were no responsibilities, no worries and no choices to be made. Just kids having fun.
The doorknob turned and Tina’s head immediately whipped back to face it, her heart stopping for a second. She was afraid of the reaction to her visit.
The mahogany door slowly opened and revealed a very surprised Dana. Before she could say anything however, Tina immediately held up her hands and stopped her.
"I just wanted to apologize for last night" The blonde rushed out in fear of having the door slammed in her face, though she knew she deserved it.
Dana couldn’t deny that she wanted to shut the door on Tina but she decided against it. There was so much regret, guilt and sincerity in those hazel eyes.
Realizing Dana wasn’t rejecting her, Tina decided to speak before the brunette changed her mind.
"Look Dane . . I was wrong . . beyond wrong in what I said and did last night. I guess I was just hurt at all the things you guys said because deep down I knew it was true . . I didn’t want to accept or even face what I’ve become over the years"
Tina paused for a second, trying to read Dana’s blank expression and hoping that she didn’t completely mess things up with the brunette. When she saw Dana lean against the door frame interested in listening to the rest, Tina relaxed and continued.
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(35 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
PPS. Intriguing story w/a different kind of Bette.
I’m going out for a couple of hours…any chance you might like to post another chapter B4 lights out!??!!!! Pwetty Pwease! This is way to much fun!!!!!
First of all, so sorry for your loss but pleased that writing helps you feels better and we reap the benefits with your wonderful stories.I wish i was disciplined enough to not read your chapters when you post them, but wait until i can read the whole story as one block. But i’m not that person, so just jump to read your story as soon as i find your new chapters! Please post soon and hope you continue to feel better in the days to come. x
Hi Liah .. I am sorry for your lost! It’s though and I hope you’ll feel better soon. And thanks for another update from you!! :-)
WOW they are to explode when they actually touch each other again I am loving this slow burn. This story is nothing short of brilliant never really cared for the movie but I love the premise….
I know how you feel Tina, because the next post seems so far away 😝loved it very much Liah. You rocked the beginning of my weekend. Thank you 😃👍
I’m really sorry for your loss. Thanks for taking the time to write and post, this story rock.
So sorry for your loss, just remember the good times. The story is really wonderful and you are pacing it just fine. You did however leave us hangin’ just a little and I understand but, still I wanted just a bit more. Wish they would admit to wanting each other again and never having stopped loving each other. helena should have contacted Tina before announcing the engagement, that was totally unfair. But in the end helena will have egg on her face, at least I hope. Thanks for taking the time to post while in mourning, it is really appreciated.
With the excitement of leaving a message for this wonderful update I forgot to say I’m so sorry for your loss. If it’s any consolation, they are forever in our hearts. Take care.
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
I am sorry for your loss. Thanks for putting aside your grief to write this beautiful chapter for us. It is very much appreciated.
very good i like it sweet home allabama!!!
love it.. Im so happy cuz I know what movie it is I was crazy trying to remember great chap
Yay great chapter! Can’t wait for more!!!
Tinnoccio!! Great story.
I’m sorry for your loss.This is a wonderful story,thank you.PPS
heyhun am really enjoying this. sorry for your loss and sending hugs. It is hard to write when dealing with the hard parts of life and I thank you for helping me see that sometimes writing is a good way of dealing with the rough aswellm as the smooth parts of it. Thank you :)
so sorry for your loss. i’m glad you posted, i’ve been missing this story, checkin every hour for an update. can’t wait for the next chapter at the fair, that’s where all the fun starts, right? bring it on! thank you for the update *hugs*