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Soul Mates – Chapter 4
"There’s no excuse for what I did and I’m not tryin’ to make one . . but I am sorry, Dana. From the bottom of my heart, I’m so very sorry. You were always one of my closest friends and I’ll never forgive myself for what I did to you"
Tina felt the tears well up in her eyes as she waited as patiently as possible for any kind of response from Dana. The brunette simply stared at her, slowly letting everything sink in. Tina had always been such a beloved friend of hers and it hurt when the blonde left without even saying goodbye.
Still, Dana was never one to hold a grudge, she loved her friends too much. Tina was no exception and Dana stood by that even more when she saw that Tina truly meant what she said.
Dana crossed her arms over her chest as she continued to lean against the door frame and nodded intently. She knew it was cruel of her, the frightened look on Tina’s face was evidence enough but Dana couldn’t help herself. She may have forgiven Tina but it wouldn’t hurt to keep the blonde in suspense for a little while longer.
"You’ll never forgive yourself? That’s kinda harsh don’t cha think?"
Tina’s eyes widened, relief and hope flooding her features as she saw a smirk form on Dana’s delicate face. The brunette pushed off the door frame and stepped onto the porch, closing the door behind her, laughing at the Tina’s stunned expression.
"Smile, Tina you’re kinda scarin’ me"
The blonde was still unable to form a suitable expression, tears had slid down her cheeks as Dana pulled her in for a big hug. She instantly fell into the embrace and whispered a thousand more apologies.
"Its okay, Tina" Dana said laughing and rubbing Tina’s back.
"No its not . . I don’t wanna get you in trouble. I’ll talk to your parents and say I made it up. I’ll say I was talkin’ about someone else. I’ll-"
"Tina!" Dana said with another laugh, grabbing the babbling blonde by her shoulders and shaking her "Its okay. They don’t know"
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(35 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
PPS. Intriguing story w/a different kind of Bette.
I’m going out for a couple of hours…any chance you might like to post another chapter B4 lights out!??!!!! Pwetty Pwease! This is way to much fun!!!!!
First of all, so sorry for your loss but pleased that writing helps you feels better and we reap the benefits with your wonderful stories.I wish i was disciplined enough to not read your chapters when you post them, but wait until i can read the whole story as one block. But i’m not that person, so just jump to read your story as soon as i find your new chapters! Please post soon and hope you continue to feel better in the days to come. x
Hi Liah .. I am sorry for your lost! It’s though and I hope you’ll feel better soon. And thanks for another update from you!! :-)
WOW they are to explode when they actually touch each other again I am loving this slow burn. This story is nothing short of brilliant never really cared for the movie but I love the premise….
I know how you feel Tina, because the next post seems so far away 😝loved it very much Liah. You rocked the beginning of my weekend. Thank you 😃👍
I’m really sorry for your loss. Thanks for taking the time to write and post, this story rock.
So sorry for your loss, just remember the good times. The story is really wonderful and you are pacing it just fine. You did however leave us hangin’ just a little and I understand but, still I wanted just a bit more. Wish they would admit to wanting each other again and never having stopped loving each other. helena should have contacted Tina before announcing the engagement, that was totally unfair. But in the end helena will have egg on her face, at least I hope. Thanks for taking the time to post while in mourning, it is really appreciated.
With the excitement of leaving a message for this wonderful update I forgot to say I’m so sorry for your loss. If it’s any consolation, they are forever in our hearts. Take care.
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
I am sorry for your loss. Thanks for putting aside your grief to write this beautiful chapter for us. It is very much appreciated.
very good i like it sweet home allabama!!!
love it.. Im so happy cuz I know what movie it is I was crazy trying to remember great chap
Yay great chapter! Can’t wait for more!!!
Tinnoccio!! Great story.
I’m sorry for your loss.This is a wonderful story,thank you.PPS
heyhun am really enjoying this. sorry for your loss and sending hugs. It is hard to write when dealing with the hard parts of life and I thank you for helping me see that sometimes writing is a good way of dealing with the rough aswellm as the smooth parts of it. Thank you :)
so sorry for your loss. i’m glad you posted, i’ve been missing this story, checkin every hour for an update. can’t wait for the next chapter at the fair, that’s where all the fun starts, right? bring it on! thank you for the update *hugs*