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Stained – Chapter 10
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"That was a good party." Shane said to herself, thinking back to Bette’s pool party that had gotten somewhat out of control.
"Alice Pieszecki, you wouldn’t dare! Just know that I will personally hunt you down, tie you to a chair and make you listen to Britney Spears for days."
"Noooooooooooo, not Britney Spears. I’m telling you, that woman is Satan’s messenger."
"Oh, come on Al! Her music might not be great, but she’s harmless. And hot!" Dana joined the conversation.
"Don’t let her fool you, Dana! That’s exactly what she wants you to think, so she can keep on spreading evil messages hidden in those catchy tunes… Don’t worry, though."Alice squeezed her eyes half close in a very sinister way. "I’m onto her."
"Don’t even think about giving us the lecture about that gold digging husband of hers being a Messiah-in-the-making because he’s going to steal all her money so she’ll be to upset to ‘spread the evil message’ – Bette used air quotes – again. I’m glad you didn’t get to that part at little Bobby Wilson’s baptism."
"I planned to write the Pope about it, but then he died and left us with that really creepy German Pope."
"John Paul II always did have excellent timing." Shane chuckled.
"You can laugh about it if you want, but just think about that poor boy Kevin and what he has to go through to make this world a better place. Viva la resistance!
Viva la resistance!" Alice sadly shook her head.
"Yes, poor him. He gets to bang Britney Spears and live the grand life. I’m sure it’s just eating him up inside. He looks positively destroyed." Shane again.
"Don’t they have a child together?" Dana asked Alice.
"Yes they do. Slight deviation of the plan." Alice looked troubled. "Oh well, even Jesus got off course at one point with that Mary Magdalene."
"You should be careful Alice. Some day you’ll make up another one of your crazy church cover-ups that turns out to be true and you will be abducted by members of a long forgotten religious cult and locked up in some secret monastery to keep the truth form coming out." Bette tried to keep a straight face, but even as an actress she found it hard.
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Finally… And I haven’t strangled anyone either. That 3rd page is really fascinating, isn’t it? ;) Sorry to fuck up your reading by deleting the story and reposting it again, but the comment to your comment in this window didn’t work out either – one big sentence with about 500 words is not pleasant to look at. Going back to hitting my head against the wall now…
I was a little surprised when half-way through reading, the story disappeared, but it came back and I’m happy that it did. Love the humour in the interaction between the group. Looking forward to the next chapter!
absolutely love reading this story! and ur author’s comments too. in fact yours is the only one i read despite its length. love the humor! and i am with you about working under pressure. that’s how i’ve been coping with school for as long as i can remember:)
And I thought I was the only one dreaming of the blond haired angel and the dark haired goddess. Those are some wild dreams that keep invading my sleep. I am glad that you can not go cold turkey on Fan Fiction writing. Just who do those professors think they are by making you take exams. Did you explain to them that you have fans who need to read your stories to brighten up their days? They should be ashamed of themselves for making your life miserable. I really do enjoy this story and only hope that you do well on your exams so that you can enlighten us with the ladies’ lives. (IC really has no clue how to enjoy her life, because she screwed the ladies’ lives up so badly).
I’m echoing Pattifloatn’s comments. School just interferes with your true education. Glad the page foulup was corrected.
this is great and funny..bette better call, especially if tina did leave that earring on purpose
hey lady… i love this story… now i can’t always comment because i read a lot at work… and i can’t comment there… alice is alice in all of our stories and i love her… and i also love how you put the earring trick in this… noq get bette to call tina… or even tina could call bette to ask if she found her earing in the car… either way would be fine… but please do it soon… later babe… please continue
Good chapter. They are good, funny and Alice is so crazy but we all love her. OK let see whats next, thanks!
Well baby, you continue with your school and do your best. We will stay tuned for your next chapter. So post soon.. :)
Love is a battlefield…sounds like my first serious relationship. Oi! I LOL’d at the carnival photos. xD I’m sorry this comment sucks so bad. I had a 3-hour drive earlier and I’m just feeling generally crappy. =/
great story great story…
Love this story, and all your ramblings. Alice is Alice, loved Shane’s cos I could use a car. The ole earring trick, thankfully we never get tired of it. Can’t wait for more, but studies first.
This Alice is so funny, sorry for all the trouble for the posting but it worthy this is good. continue let me see what will you do with the earing thing.
So fucking hilarious, but I missed B&T in this chapter. Please bring them togehter soon – I love this story and Bette is just amazing, I love your Bette :o))
I’m far too tired to leave an intelligent comment, but here goes: Groupiness, nice. Bette & Alice, funny. Next chapter, looking forward to.