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Stained – Chapter 10
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"Well, Britney Spears being Satan’s messenger or not, I’m going to make us some cocktails." Shane changed the subject.
"Could you make me one with cucumber? My coach put me on a really strict diet." Dana said, not looking too thrilled about it.
"Dana! You can’t have a girls night in with cucumber cocktails! That’s just gross." Alice had come to the conclusion one should only eat unhealthy foods after seeing what her coach made Dana eat.
"It’s not that bad. Besides, it’s healthy. When was the last time you ate vegetables, Al?" Dana asked her a little concerned.
"There is a reason they are green. You should never trust green food; green’s a moldy color."
"That is such a twisted argument that I can’t even reason with it." Dana threw her hands up in despair.
"I think you’ve just figured out how Alice gets through life." Shane said before going to the kitchen. She returned with cocktails for all of them.
"So Bette, what did you do today? You’ve had a smile plastered on your face this whole time." Shane didn’t mean to pry, but she could sense Bette wanted to talk about it.
"Yeah, spill it Porter. Who made your day? Didn’t you just have interviews and a photo shoot today? Alice joined in with Shane.
"Yes, I did. They weren’t so bad, though. There was this really nice photographer and she was good, too."
"Stop the presses! Bette Porter enjoying a day filled with photo shoots and interviews? What’s really going on here? Wait a second; you went to see the ice cream woman, didn’t you?" Alice made it sound like an accusation.
Bette was always surprise at how well her friends really knew her. "Well, I did promise the kid to come see him again."
"Did you make out with the Mother Theresa-chick?" Alice decided to cut to the chase.
"Alice! She has a boyfriend!"
"So? It’s not like he could be serious competition for you."
"I’m not a home-wrecker."
"Their relationship can’t be that solid if she’s all over you. Which she is, right?"
"I don’t know. We have this…I don’t know…connection. Sounds stupid, I know. I think she can feel it too, though. Or maybe she’s just star struck."
"That doesn’t sound stupid at all." Dana supported Bette.
"It sounds like you’re falling for her." Shane added.
"Well, I don’t know about that, but there is definitely something there and I want to find out what it is. That doesn’t change the fact that she has a boyfriend, though." Bette sighed.
"Soooo, are you going to see her again?" Alice impatiently asked.
Bette’s smile returned without her even being aware of it. "I drove her home from The Centre, yesterday. Her earring seems to have fallen out, so I have to return it to her somehow."
"Fallen out, my ass! That’s like the oldest trick in the book!" Alice triumphantly exclaimed. "See, I knew she was into you!"
"She’s not like that, Alice. She is too naive to even notice how much I like her. Which is really cute."
Alice rolled her eyes. "Yeah, okay. You’re a goner, Porter. I say go for it. Make her see what she’s missing out on with her boyfriend. That’s not being a home-wrecker. Love is a battlefield!"
"Well, enough about me and Tina. Tell me what I’ve missed!" And the rest of the evening was spent catching up and having fun.
Bette left a little early to catch up on her sleep. She was beat! Right before she drifted off to sleep, Bette thought: ‘I’ll call her tomorrow.’ Then she lost herself in a wonderful dream about an angel with golden hair.
TBC.
TBC…
Bloody hell, this chapter is gonna be the end of me. It just disappeared… Well, hope this works and hope it STAYS this time.
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Finally… And I haven’t strangled anyone either. That 3rd page is really fascinating, isn’t it? ;) Sorry to fuck up your reading by deleting the story and reposting it again, but the comment to your comment in this window didn’t work out either – one big sentence with about 500 words is not pleasant to look at. Going back to hitting my head against the wall now…
I was a little surprised when half-way through reading, the story disappeared, but it came back and I’m happy that it did. Love the humour in the interaction between the group. Looking forward to the next chapter!
absolutely love reading this story! and ur author’s comments too. in fact yours is the only one i read despite its length. love the humor! and i am with you about working under pressure. that’s how i’ve been coping with school for as long as i can remember:)
And I thought I was the only one dreaming of the blond haired angel and the dark haired goddess. Those are some wild dreams that keep invading my sleep. I am glad that you can not go cold turkey on Fan Fiction writing. Just who do those professors think they are by making you take exams. Did you explain to them that you have fans who need to read your stories to brighten up their days? They should be ashamed of themselves for making your life miserable. I really do enjoy this story and only hope that you do well on your exams so that you can enlighten us with the ladies’ lives. (IC really has no clue how to enjoy her life, because she screwed the ladies’ lives up so badly).
I’m echoing Pattifloatn’s comments. School just interferes with your true education. Glad the page foulup was corrected.
this is great and funny..bette better call, especially if tina did leave that earring on purpose
hey lady… i love this story… now i can’t always comment because i read a lot at work… and i can’t comment there… alice is alice in all of our stories and i love her… and i also love how you put the earring trick in this… noq get bette to call tina… or even tina could call bette to ask if she found her earing in the car… either way would be fine… but please do it soon… later babe… please continue
Good chapter. They are good, funny and Alice is so crazy but we all love her. OK let see whats next, thanks!
Well baby, you continue with your school and do your best. We will stay tuned for your next chapter. So post soon.. :)
Love is a battlefield…sounds like my first serious relationship. Oi! I LOL’d at the carnival photos. xD I’m sorry this comment sucks so bad. I had a 3-hour drive earlier and I’m just feeling generally crappy. =/
great story great story…
Love this story, and all your ramblings. Alice is Alice, loved Shane’s cos I could use a car. The ole earring trick, thankfully we never get tired of it. Can’t wait for more, but studies first.
This Alice is so funny, sorry for all the trouble for the posting but it worthy this is good. continue let me see what will you do with the earing thing.
So fucking hilarious, but I missed B&T in this chapter. Please bring them togehter soon – I love this story and Bette is just amazing, I love your Bette :o))
I’m far too tired to leave an intelligent comment, but here goes: Groupiness, nice. Bette & Alice, funny. Next chapter, looking forward to.