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    Stained – Chapter 9 part 2

    Story written on May 5, 2006 by Nocturnal.
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    Tom Cruise is not gay. No, really. A B&T Beginning.

    When they had played for about an hour and a half, Veronica suggested they take a half hour brake and they went back to the main building to eat something. For the second time today, Tina did not get to sit next to Bette, but neither did David. Their redheaded trainer had beaten them to it and she and Bette continued their joking and laughing together.

    After lunch they returned to the golf course and Veronica told them they were going to practice their swing. She showed them the general idea before breaking it down in steps. Naturally, all the novices failed miserably on their first attempt and Bette and Veronica came by to give everybody individual tips and help.

    ‘Damn, I hate golfing.’ Tina thought as her ball landed about 3 feet away.

    "You have to really transfer your weight from one foot to the other." She suddenly heard Bette say and Tina couldn’t stop a smile from spreading across her face.

    "I think my parents love golf so much that god decided to punish them by making sure their child had no golf talent what so ever. Or maybe he just gave all my talent to you."

    "And aren’t I just eternally grateful for it. Let’s put my talents to the test and see if they can make you swing."

    And with that Bette moved towards Tina and stood very closely behind her. Tina could feel Bette’s breast pressing against her back. Her heart rate spiked. ‘Oh, I’m swinging alright.’ Bette placed her hands over Tina’s and Tina could feel her skin being set on fire. Her breathing deepened and Tina could feel herself heating up in an area that was usually unaffected when someone stood close; even when Eric stood close. Then she felt Bette’s hot breath in her ear.

    "There we go."

    They made the swing together and it was pretty darn good. ‘Yeah, I think I like golfing now. What am I saying, I love it!’ Those were the only thoughts in Tina’s mind. The only PG-rated thoughts, that is.

    "Any time you want to make use of my talents again, just let me know."

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    2. oooh the earring! different situation but the earring still present! this chapter was so nice and the part Bette teaching Tina play golf excellent! i can’t wait for the next chapter, thanks for spent your time writing!

    4. Lovin’ lovin’ lovin’ this story nocT! You cracked me up with you Authors Note and then with this chapter too! Especially when you broke in with your rant about your “awful metaphor.” You’re hilarious! So glad you staved off the window sander long enough to finish this for us! Oh and I feel your sarcasm – and I like it! Can’t wait for more of Chapter 9!

    8. Ok am grinning like a loon and I have you to thank for it. Absolutely genius chapter. I was already loving it from the author’s note at the start! Loved the author’s interuption to laugh at her own metaphor and was literally laughing out loud (to disturb my housemates) at the suggestion of Alice making a list of celebrities who wouldn’t sign her ass. Just fantastic! Oh and I thought it was cool the way you brought in the earring. Ah Bette and Tina beginnings – is there anything better? Reading this was just bliss. Hope your studying goes so well that you have time to spare to work on your tan and write more chapters for the salivating masses!

    9. “Nice car.” This statement alone is laughworthy because I’ve seen “Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” so many damn times and “Nice car” pops up a lot in reference to Evie’s beast of a vehicle. Love the little “time out.” lol Maybe the reason “I” is capitalized is because the person who made up that rule was very egocentric. But then I have to wonder why nouns are capitalized in German. So much to think about…Veronica needed her Ronald McDonald ass kicked. Tina should call Bette and be like, “Yes, I need to make use of your talents…for golfing. I want to go golfing with my parents and since I suck at it I need some help. blah blah blah” The rest doesn’t matter. I wonder if Tina knows she left her earring in the SAAB? Maybe she did it accidentally on purpose. >:D

    10. Okay I confess I have been a silent reader since the beginning. I love your sense of humor. I had to stop myself from LOL because I am at work and do not want to alert anytone to that fact that I am not really working right now, oh well! Anyways, I am loving this story, especially the random thoughts tina has,classic. Funny thing “Notting Hill” has been on all this week on cable and I immediately thought of this story. Keep em’ coming! Also I have no don’t know why I is capatilized, english is weird like that,, afterall it is a bastard language!

    12. you really crack me up, i think i can totally really to your wacky sence of humor, can’t wait to see where you go next!!!!!!!!!!!

    17. Good chapter. Bette and Tina have a good time and now the erring will be the reason for them to see each other again and hope soon. Damn Alice is crazy and funny too. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    19. I really need golf lessons. Do you think that I borrow Bette for a private lesson? Poor Tina keeps loosing that damn earring. Maybe I need to loose mine. I would take Bette or Tina anytime and hope that one of them find it. My luck it be the golf instructor. Love the story and hopefully Eric will be taking that long road trip soon.

    20. What I can say that has not been said already. Except Tom Cruise IS NOT GAY!;)Wink wink. Move the computer outside and get a tan while you write more chapters I solved your problem.

    21. So funny this story, you’re better and more crazy than Alice LOL, but it’s a good thing. The post was also very sweet and I like the earring thing, did Tina do it on purpose??? Post soon – I’m addicted….

    22. Loved this line: “Tina could feel Bette’s breast pressing against her back. Her heart rate spiked. ‘Oh, I’m swinging alright…” Very cute.

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