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Stained – Chapter 9 part 2
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"I believe this one is yours."
"That’s right. Hi baby, did you have fun?"
"Hmmhmm." David growled as he was being transferred from Bette to his mother.
"I’m Gloria. You must be Bette. David has been going on and on about you for the last two weeks. He really likes you." David’s mother said warmly.
Bette smiled. "It’s a mutual feeling."
"Well, I better get this one to bed. I was great meeting you, Bette. I’ll see you around, hopefully and maybe a little longer next time." Gloria smiled apologetically.
"Likewise and you can count on it."
When Bette looked around she saw that most of the kids had been collected. There were only three kids left and one of the other volunteers told Bette that they were dropping those kids off themselves on their way home. So another fifteen minutes and one autograph for a little sister later Bette and Tina were the only ones left in the building.
"Let me just lock this up and then we’re done." Tina told Bette.
She made her round, locked everything up and they went outside. Bette looked over at Tina and saw something glistering in her blonde tresses.
"You seem to have lost your earring. Let me get that for you." Bette reached over and carefully untangled the earring from Tina’s golden locks.
Tina slightly held her breath at Bette’s close proximity. She wanted to lean her cheek against Bette’s hand to feel her soft skin, but decided against it.
Bette smiled and gave her the earring. "There you go."
Tina didn’t say anything and continued to stare into Bette’s bottomless eyes. After what seemed to be hours but were only seconds, she suddenly became aware of the surroundings. She blinked, blushed lightly and turned her head, while mumbling something along the lines of: "Thank you."
Along with Tina Bette returned to planet earth again, finding it a little disappointing after just having visited the Hazel planets also known as Tina’s eyes.
*Haha, LOL at my awful metaphor and totally taking you out of the special moment. I know, I know, I suck big time. You can count on me to interrupt a moment when there’s no Alice around to do so. B&T are on freeze frame in my mind right now, kinda cool :D. I have a question for you native speakers. What’s with the capital I for the first-person singular?
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u had me grinning stupidly as well…the best line…bout the men in white suits…good times and hell yes the infamous earing
oooh the earring! different situation but the earring still present! this chapter was so nice and the part Bette teaching Tina play golf excellent! i can’t wait for the next chapter, thanks for spent your time writing!
You’re totaly crazy, and I love it. Don’t fight the men in white jackets… It’s for the best. Post soon, I can’t wait…
Lovin’ lovin’ lovin’ this story nocT! You cracked me up with you Authors Note and then with this chapter too! Especially when you broke in with your rant about your “awful metaphor.” You’re hilarious! So glad you staved off the window sander long enough to finish this for us! Oh and I feel your sarcasm – and I like it! Can’t wait for more of Chapter 9!
awesome post! I love how you included the whole earing thing, please please please post again soon some of us can’t wait very long! cheers
Have you tried medication? Anyway, I like this story;please post agin soon.
Just caught up. Awesome story. I’m a sucka for B&T beginnings. Good luck with your studies and post soon.
Ok am grinning like a loon and I have you to thank for it. Absolutely genius chapter. I was already loving it from the author’s note at the start! Loved the author’s interuption to laugh at her own metaphor and was literally laughing out loud (to disturb my housemates) at the suggestion of Alice making a list of celebrities who wouldn’t sign her ass. Just fantastic! Oh and I thought it was cool the way you brought in the earring. Ah Bette and Tina beginnings – is there anything better? Reading this was just bliss. Hope your studying goes so well that you have time to spare to work on your tan and write more chapters for the salivating masses!
“Nice car.” This statement alone is laughworthy because I’ve seen “Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” so many damn times and “Nice car” pops up a lot in reference to Evie’s beast of a vehicle. Love the little “time out.” lol Maybe the reason “I” is capitalized is because the person who made up that rule was very egocentric. But then I have to wonder why nouns are capitalized in German. So much to think about…Veronica needed her Ronald McDonald ass kicked. Tina should call Bette and be like, “Yes, I need to make use of your talents…for golfing. I want to go golfing with my parents and since I suck at it I need some help. blah blah blah” The rest doesn’t matter. I wonder if Tina knows she left her earring in the SAAB? Maybe she did it accidentally on purpose. >:D
Okay I confess I have been a silent reader since the beginning. I love your sense of humor. I had to stop myself from LOL because I am at work and do not want to alert anytone to that fact that I am not really working right now, oh well! Anyways, I am loving this story, especially the random thoughts tina has,classic. Funny thing “Notting Hill” has been on all this week on cable and I immediately thought of this story. Keep em’ coming! Also I have no don’t know why I is capatilized, english is weird like that,, afterall it is a bastard language!
This is a great read, funny and easy going…thankyou I look forward to lots more chapters…thankyou
you really crack me up, i think i can totally really to your wacky sence of humor, can’t wait to see where you go next!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome story:) one of my new favs!
Ahhh… the elusive earring. Way to go Bette. You are a wacky wacky writer Nocturnal, love your style and this story!!
Funny, delightful and clever. Great combo!
very humorous and i’m sensing a kiss coming since bette found the earring..this was great once again
Good chapter. Bette and Tina have a good time and now the erring will be the reason for them to see each other again and hope soon. Damn Alice is crazy and funny too. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I always find your chapter so great…I want more, please give me more…Soon =)
I really need golf lessons. Do you think that I borrow Bette for a private lesson? Poor Tina keeps loosing that damn earring. Maybe I need to loose mine. I would take Bette or Tina anytime and hope that one of them find it. My luck it be the golf instructor. Love the story and hopefully Eric will be taking that long road trip soon.
What I can say that has not been said already. Except Tom Cruise IS NOT GAY!;)Wink wink. Move the computer outside and get a tan while you write more chapters I solved your problem.
So funny this story, you’re better and more crazy than Alice LOL, but it’s a good thing. The post was also very sweet and I like the earring thing, did Tina do it on purpose??? Post soon – I’m addicted….
Loved this line: “Tina could feel Bette’s breast pressing against her back. Her heart rate spiked. ‘Oh, I’m swinging alright…” Very cute.
hello there! Jeetje hoe doe je dat toch? Echt super! Thanks for the update!