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Rising from her seat as Bette got closer, Tina reached out her hand, a bridge of sorts, and drew her wife to the chair so she could sit down. Now holding Tina’s hand in both of her own, a lifeline, an anchor, her succor, Bette smiled at her mother, a shy, tentative smile that to Tina was heartbreaking and devastatingly beautiful at the same time.
For the briefest of seconds, she saw the abandoned little girl still sitting in Bette’s heart, yearning for connection, wanting her mother. Tina tumbled into love with her wife all over again.
Weakly, Maxine reached for her daughter and Bette did not hesitate even as she kept Tina’s in one hand, and the whole room seemed to sigh as they gazed at each other.
“How are you?” Bette asked her mother, quietly, not wanting to break the spell.
Unable to speak, for tears were now coursing down her frail cheeks, Maxine only shook her head, Tina stepping closer to lean on her wife, her hand losing itself in the curls at the back of her head.
“She’s still feverish, Honey. Not eating. We need to make a detour, go to the nearest port and look for new medication.”
Quiet, Bette looked at her mother, seeing the gaunt cheekbones and veined hands, the fever flush in her eyes. She was wearing a thin shift, the portholes open a fraction to let in cool air. Standing, Bette opened the windows all the way then took off her leather coat, rolled up her sleeves, her eyes meeting Tina’s.
“It’s stuffy in here.”
“That will let the rain in.”
“It’s ok, Honey. It’s just water. She needs this room to be cooler, it will help.”
“You’re soaking wet. You should change before you catch a chill.”
Taking her wife’s hand, Bette kissed the center of her palm. “What else does she need?”
“The nursemaid is coming. I gave Maxine something to help her sleep. Rest is helpful so her body can fight this infection.”
“I will sit with her…”
“Yes, sit while she drifts off. Then you need to get out of those clothes, you are soaked through. Babe, we need to talk about another plan to get some medicine, please.”
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Liked it, I loved it, Action packed and full of love. I loved the title of “The Crispy King.” Thanks for posting. What a great adventure with a happy ending.
Thank you Cathy! May not be the end, we will see where my brain takes me!
As is my norm I read the last page first. Wiped my tears and posted this. I cannot wait to read the rest. And I am so very happy you have come out the other side of all you have gone through. Congratulations on your grit and determination. I will post again soon.
Thank you! Looking forward to reading your thoughts !
Interest? Am a huge fan of all your fics. Can’t wait to read. Thanks for posting. I love love love this fic as well as your other ones.
Still hoping you will finish « Remember Who You Are – A Return to the River »
But I get it this kind of writing takes time
You just made my day
AWW thank you BT4EVR! I will have to re read the return to the river and see where I left off… thanks for the reminder that one is still unfinished. I don’t like to leave loose threads. It does take time. Hope you enjoyed this story, it is one of my favorite chapters in this story. thank you for taking time to comment, means a lot!
Thank you, BK, for this beautiful, long chapter. Feels like the end of the story is near. I hope you get as much happiness out of having written this many pages as we get out of reading them.
Take care, I hope life will allow you to continue writing. I missed your stories :)
Thank you Kiwi! Missed hearing from you, hope all is well. Glad you are still reading :)
I just saw everyone on Twitter breaking down because there was an update I had also messaged you on Twitter a while ago showing so much love so I’m so happy this has been updated I check everyday for this and the remember who you are sequel the journey your fics take me on it really feels like I’m there watching it all unfold you truly are one of my favourite writers I always reread your fics over and over especially while waiting for updates they truly make me so happy and leave me waiting for more so thank you I hope you won’t be gone so long anymore but I do hope that everything is going okay but you’re very much loved by the tibette community and you’ve been very missed not just by me but everyone I always see people asking where you are and if you’re okay you’ve been so missed and everyone especially me loves a lengthy chapter it’s incredible thank you for coming back I think we all would have been devastated if you didn’t come back and continue with this fic and remember who you are you’ve taken us to these places with you and it’s the best feeling so I’m so happy you’re back and continuing and I know everyone else would feel the same way because you’re always missed and being asked about and I hope that you will always come back
Hey Maddyson – I admit I am not on twitter very much so I missed your message! I love reading how readers feel about the stories and what they think about each chapter. It is a long chapter, I usually just write until it feels like a good time to end the action! I have started a new story and hope to do some short one offs as well. I have more time now that things have settled down. Thank you for commenting, love hearing from you!
I was so happy to see you post!! I enjoy all of your stories! Please post more ❤️ even if it takes months I still check everyday to see if you posted
Thank you Brittany! Hope you liked the chapter!
Loved the update. Thank you so much
YAY! thanks for letting me know
Hey BK,
So glad to see you back!
Of course I’m still interested in your story and other stories, you are one of the best writers and absolutely love all your stories!!!
Life can get so much in the way, bringing joy, happiness but can also be hard on you. I hope you are okay?!
This chapter is awesome and i could have read double the pages.
I absolutely love how Bette and Tina are in tune with each other, how Tina knows how to take care and handle when Bette struggles and feel uncertainty about her feelings. With care, strength, compassionate words and lots of love Tina is there for Bette.
Tina and their kids are the most important for Bette and she will always protect them. She would willingly give her life for them.
I hope Maxine and Bette will develop a good relationship, Bette took a first step to reach out and beckoning Maxine to them to enjoy a family moment.
Such a beautiful story.
Take care of yourself my friend ❤️
Hey BIBI! So nice to hear from you my friend! Hope all is well in your corner of the world. Life has been a little out of whack lately, we had a tornado hit the house in December and just now returned to living back in it. Nice to be back. Glad you liked the story, loved hearing from you!
What a beautiful chapter! Every time I hear “Crispy” I think of sweet Dana. Then the nod to the next gen proposal “one could argue but one would not would they” Thank you for saving Bette’s mom and Tina. The reunion on the beach was so sweet. Thank you for the update! It was worth the wait.
HAHAHA Ladyhawke too funny. Glad it was worth the wait and that you are still reading. Had to work some dialogue from GQ into the story somehow!
BK,
What an update! Perhaps the best one yet, I have probably said that before…but wow. This chapter had everything
“the whole epic story” That’s what this story is. It’s a GREAT adventure story, it’s a love story, Bette and her mother, Bette & Tina and their children & friends – I loved Shane telling Bette they would come find her – and Bette & Tina.
My favorite part, and there were so many, lol – ‘And raucous abandon suddenly, wildly, transformed into sweet intimacy, as it always was with them. Fast and furious passion now a poem on the wind, tears prickling at hazel eyes as Tina dissolved, completely lost to the woman above her.’ PERFECT
And the ending, made me cry.
Thanks for this update, BK. I love the way you write, I love this story and all your stories. Hope all is well.
Westy
Hi Westy! The ending was emotional, and it is hard for me to leave this story to be honest. There are many directions it could take from here, I will need to think on continuing or letting a good story end when it is time :) You and other readers who respond motivate me to keep writing these stories. I tend to overthink and rewrite the same paragraphs over and over lol. Thank you Westy~
This is my second try at a comment. My first one simply evaporated into the either…. but let’s try this again.
Thank you for the lovely chapter… so good to see you writing.
Hey Martha,
Happened to me too, it happens regular and when you try to get it from the trash and approve again it still doesn’t show up sometimes, very frustrating.
I read your first comment. Not sure what happened to it
Just in case, my comment that i tried to retrieve from the trash but still doesn’t seem to show up. Comment was written 4 days ago.
Hey BK,
So glad to see you back!
Of course I’m still interested in your story and other stories, you are one of the best writers and absolutely love all your stories!!!
Life can get so much in the way, bringing joy, happiness but can also be hard on you. I hope you are okay?!
This chapter is awesome and i could have read double the pages.
I absolutely love how Bette and Tina are in tune with each other, how Tina knows how to take care and handle when Bette struggles and feel uncertainty about her feelings. With care, strength, compassionate words and lots of love Tina is there for Bette.
Tina and their kids are the most important for Bette and she will always protect them. She would willingly give her life for them.
I hope Maxine and Bette will develop a good relationship, Bette took a first step to reach out and beckoning Maxine to them to enjoy a family moment.
Such a beautiful story.
Take care of yourself my friend ❤️
BK – You have a gift, you really do. Your B&T stories are mesmerizing and addicting. I had been reading as a guest but decided to create an account so I could tell you how much I enjoy them as well as keep tabs for new ones. Thank you and I really hope you keep at it!
KAK! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! So nice of you to create an account, there are so really cool people on this site and it is nice to hear from the readers so I know if I am on the right track. I am working on some new things, so stay tuned!
Shytttt!!!! Where have I been BK????
Did I fall into a vat of pirate gumbo??? Or was it a vat of fine rum?
Well . . . I best get to readin’ . . .
Get to reading you rascal and let us know what you think matey!
Magnificent ending. The plan to shorten the reunion with the children . . . and then when alas, they laid eyes on one another . . . Mama, Mama, Mama!!!!
And then the game of 1000 questions and even more as the Moms, especially Bette, tried to quickly satisfy their gleeful exhuberance. Pure, UNadulturated J O Y.
Gotta read those last few pages again!!!!
Wow, that was a great chapter. I don’t know how I missed it when it was posted, but I’m so glad I finally found it. I knew that little jerk was going to get his. He should have known better than to threaten our captain with possible harm to Tina. And I am so glad that the children have been reunited with their moms. Bette has been given the opportunity to have a new relationship with her mom, I hope she takes it. She needs to talk as well as listen so they both get the whole story without assuming anything. Bette knows the kind of man Melvin was, Maxine may have had to leave in order to save her own life. He certainly would not have allowed her to take his children with her. They were worth too much to him. He did imprison and try to force Bette to get married so he could gain more wealth. Even though he knew she did not care for men in that way. I’m so happy you are back with us. Hope we can expect a new chapter of RWYA soon.
Hi BK,
I seem to be a little late to the Chapter which is a result of many things needing attention in my life. I am delighted to have checked in and found this wonderful Chapter. You have a great talent and I love to read your work.
Thank you so much for the Post which as usual I loved.
I hope your life is now easier and continues to be so.
Thank you again for sharing your talent with us and I hope for another Post in the future.
SG
More entries! Please!
Thanks
I don’t know how I missed this update. I kept looking and waiting and decided to leave it for awhile. I was going to ask you if you were going to add anymore to this story and Remember Who You Are – A Return to the River today when I decided to check again. This is an amazing story and I’m so glad you updated it. You’re an amazing writer and these are the stories I always come back to when I’m missing this couple. As always I’m thankful for you putting the time in and giving us these stories. I’ll always look forward to anymore updates and new stories you bless us with. Thank you again!!