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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
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“you look so sweet and innocent …” Jo teased,
Lottie face crumpled in annoyance, refusing to let Jo get away with the ‘sweet and innocent’ comment,
They’d talked about Uni, their families, Jo’s job and the year she spent living in France, Lottie told her about New York and the reasons she chose to do Pre-Med, reasons which seemed less and less like ‘her’ the more she explained them to Jo, less and less like the person she was when she was in LA,
Every now and then Lottie felt Jo’s leg brush against hers from under the table, that exhilarating feeling of electricity that rushed between them, each time it happened she would glance at Jo, enjoying the momentary pause in their conversation as their bodies took stock of the rush of feelings,
“Oh my God …” said Lottie, nearly choking on a mouthful of spicy beef as she caught an unmistakable glimpse of Bette from over Jo’s shoulder, where she was getting up to leave with her dinner guest, “that’s Bette …!”
Jo swung around to take a look, sure enough it was,
They exchanged a quick glance before Lottie looked back, wondering if Bette had seen them and wondering who she was out to dinner with,
Bette’s eyes caught the sparkle of the familiar pair looking back at her, “Erin …” she said quietly, “I’ve been spotted … I ought to say hello,”
Erin nodded, putting on her jacket before following Bette over to the other table,
“Hi …” said Bette, touching Lottie gently on the shoulder, “fancy seeing you here,”
Bette wondered if Lottie would admit to being there on a date, she’d been trying hard not to watch them during her dinner with Erin but it was difficult, knowing they were unaware she’d been there. She’d taken note of their slight touches and flirtatious smiles, half truly happy for her sister, and half kind of scared,
“Hi …” said Jo and Lottie, innocently and together,
Obviously not then, thought Bette, as she stepped to the side introducing her dinner guest, “Guys … this is Erin Becker, an artist in residence who I’m trying to poach from NYU”
“Oh my God!!” squealed Lottie, much to the surprise of Bette and Jo … “I thought I recognised you …” she said, pushing her chair out excitedly, “I came to the seminar series you gave before Christmas … It was amazing …” Lottie gushed, “I’m a freshman at NYU,” she added, seeing that Erin looked a little confused about running into a student at a Thai place in Venice Beach,
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Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!