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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
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Erin grinned, “So you’re an Arts major?” she asked, expecting nothing less from a younger sibling of Bette’s,
Lottie shook her head reluctantly, “Actually … no … I’m doing Pre-Med” she admitted,
Erin looked a little confused and Lottie was reluctant to explain the reasons why she’d gone to Erin’s seminars because they largely involved either Bette or their mother. She was hesitant to admit that she’d wanted to learn more about art because she found herself in charge of some pretty serious collections and discovered all too quickly how little she ‘actually’ knew,
Bette was slowly learning the look on Lottie’s face when her mind took her off to places only she was privy to,
“Anyway …” said Bette, grinning at Jo’s bemused expression, “we’d best get going and leave you guys to it …” she said pointedly,
Lottie blushed, suddenly remembering that Bette had caught her out on their first date …
“Night …” said Bette,
“Nice to meet you …” said Erin, shaking Lottie’s slightly clammy hand, “perhaps whilst I’m in LA we might run in to each other again?” she suggested,
“Thanks …” replied Lottie, “I’d like that”
“You never said your sister was at NYU …” said Erin as they wandered out in to the parking lot and towards Bette’s car,
Bette gave a wry chuckle, “Before … when I said we hadn’t know each other that long … I really meant it … like less than a fortnight … she just showed up here … although I did know she goes to NYU …” Bette added, “I just didn’t think to say …”
Erin paused, “Wow … that’s heavy”
“Yeah …” said Bette, realising that about summed things up, “wow …”
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“You’re so cute when you get all excited about stuff” said Jo quietly as they waited for their waitress to bring the bill,
Lottie grinned at her, waiting for an explanation,
Jo leant back in her seat, taking in the whole package sat in front of her, Lottie looked even prettier when she smiled like that, her whole face lit up with a bright toothy grin, she looked so natural, Jo shook her head slightly, realising that she was staring,
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Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!