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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
“I noticed it the first time you came up to the school …” Jo continued, “when you got all ‘carried away’ telling me about Shakespeare’s Animated Tales and how I absolutely *had* to see them … your eyes get all sparkly and you start talking ‘really really fast’ …” she added, mimicking the way Lottie had spoken to Erin just before,
Lottie grinned, “Is that so?”
“Uh huh …” Jo leant forwards, resting her chin on her hands seriously, “for some reason it makes me want to find out all the things that make you smile like that … and take note of them”
Lottie felt her pulse rate rising as she fought the urge to tell Jo the one thing, currently at least, that made her feel as excited as she’d just described,
“Why do you do Pre-Med? … if you like art so much?” Jo asked …
Lottie shrugged, taking a gulp of water to clear the invisible lump forming in her throat,
“Clearly it makes you happy …” Jo added, when Lottie volunteered no explanation,
Lottie sighed, “I dunno, I guess nobody ever believed art was a suitable career choice for me …” she said wistfully,
“But Bette’s made a successful career out of it” stated Jo, confused,
“Yeah … but I didn’t ‘know’ Bette then … when I picked out schools … maybe if I had things would have been different”
Jo nodded, wondering if there were other things about herself that knowing Bette now would make Lottie consider changing …
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“I’m back …” called Bette softly, as she threw her keys and bag down onto the window seat beside the front door,
“In here …” called Tina from the lounge,
Bette paused for a moment, leaning against the wall watching Tina, she was sat curled up at the edge of the sofa beneath a reading lamp with soft music playing in the background,
“Hey …” said Bette exhausted as she leant in to kiss Tina before sitting down, “what a day …”
Tina put down the article she was reading and pulled Bette’s head to rest in her lap, running her fingers gently though Bette’s hair as she lay down,
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(38 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!