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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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Bette nodded,
Melvin continued, “You really must tell me more about yourself, I understand we have already spoken?”
Lottie stammered, “Er … um … yes, I erm, … I called you pretending to be tracing Bette’s Alumni year at NYU,”
Melvin smiled, “I remember,” he turned to Bette, “didn’t I say that a very pleasant young lady had called?”
Bette nodded again, he had indeed said that,
Lottie glanced up, “I’m sorry for misleading you”
Melvin shook his head, “Nonsense,” he paused, “it sounds rather like you had your work cut out for you in tracking down my daughter altogether,”
Lottie nodded, acknowledging that it had, in fact, been hard,
Tina dragged Bette back indoors to help her with the fruit once it became clear that Lottie was doing a fairly good job of holding her own with Melvin,
In the kitchen she pulled Bette close, “See, I told you all she needed was some time,” she wrapped her arms around Bette’s neck tightly, “she’s like you baby,” Tina teased, “stubborn!”
“Hey!” replied Bette, frowning at the cheeky comment, “I’m not stubborn,”
“Ha!” replied Tina, “not stubborn huh? … yeah right!”
Bette stood before her, pouting,
Tina pulled Bette’s face towards her, placing a gentle kiss upon those pouting lips, Bette carried on pouting, adding in some puppy dog eyes and a downtrodden expression the more that Tina kissed her,
Lottie coughed nervously in the doorway, ever so slightly amused by the sight of Bette playing coy with her wife,
Bette turned quickly, embarrassed to have been caught being so mushy with Tina,
“I … erm … sorry” said Lottie, feeling bad for interrupting them,
Tina waved her hand to wave the comment away, “No worries” she assured her, “is everything okay”
Lottie nodded, stepping closer, “Uh huh … your father is really lovely” she said to Bette’s embarrassed back,
Bette turned and nodded,
“I … um … I wondered if you remembered today’s Angie’s first dress rehearsal?” Lottie asked, adding, “I know things have been a bit crazy around here,”
Tina glanced at Bette, “No … I hadn’t … shit”
“She has everything she needs thought, right?” Bette asked, looking to either one of them for an answer,
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!