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Summer Vacation. Chapter 25
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Tina shrugged, “I think so … … … ANGIE …” she yelled, “come in here a second”
Angie bowled in, shoving another piece of blueberry muffin into her mouth,
“Do you have everything you need for your costume?” Bette asked, concerned that something important with their daughter might have been overlooked,
Angie nodded, her mouth still full, “Uh humph … Mama bought my foo foo and my fooos and Loffie made my fings …” she finished, nodding towards Lottie,
Tina and Lottie burst into giggles, “What?” asked Tina again, needing a translation,
Lottie tried hard to stop laughing long enough to give her one, “I think she said ‘her tutu and her shoes and that I made her wings’ …”
Bette chuckled, “Well that’s a relief”
“No wait!” said Angie, suddenly remembering, she turned to Lottie, covering her mouth in despair, “I forgot my crown …”
Bette sighed, wondering where she was going to find crown on a Sunday, “Angie,” she groaned, “why didn’t you tell us sooner,”
Lottie grinned at her, “Relax Bette, she just has to have a garland made of flowers and leaves and stuff,” she looked at Angie, “we can make it from the garden,”
Angie nodded, “I’m gonna go pick some now … can I Mama?” she asked, already running out towards the garden,
“Not my roses!” Tina called after her, she stared at Bette and Lottie chuckling,
“What?” asked Bette, thinking it had been a crisis narrowly averted,
Tina shook her head, “Not that … I was just thinking that we’ve left your Dad alone with Alice for the last ten minutes,”
Bette groaned, already walking away, “We’re coming Daddy …”
Lottie looked for the right moment to bring up the issue of her mothers ring but it never seemed to come, Melvin asked her question after question, seeking to know the details of how she’d come to learn about Bette and her mother’s life before she’d had her. It turned out of course that the details were never as full as Melvin would have like and when it came to the subject of Maxine’s death Lottie was relieved that Melvin, like the rest of them, seemed happy to discuss just the bare minimum,
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two a day. thanks for this
ok so am waiting…when’s the next one gonna b up…huh..huh??? this one was sweet, got all the basis covered. for a while there I thought that u’d have someone at Jo’s apartment. *wipes forehead* NPP!!!
Lottie and Jo really are adorable… thank the stars Bette and Lottie finally got together and found some common ground and had a *real* talk. I hope this is the start of them becoming really close. Well as close as they can be, with the age gap. …Oh to have been a fly on the wall when Melvin walked in on Miss Pieszecki… I get the giggles just thinking about that. Great chapter, sofa, thanks!
2for2 love it…im glad bette comin around with lottie..p.p.s.
I get so into your writing….I hate to scroll down and come to the end, but, alas! there is always the anticipation of more… Love how Lottie is slowly, but surely getting the family she so clearly wants, but doesn’t everyone… wonderful….
Awesome. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Something tells me Bette isn’t going to let her little sister remain in a premed program. I loved it. PPS
What a great story. FResh and delicious.
I so love this story!!!! Bette and Lottie are so alike its funny. But I am glad they are becomming close. Thank you PPS
The second coming of Bette and Tina starring Lottie and Jo as the star crossed lovers. Alice is still Alice. You know that she will always be there for you. I like how you have written Melvin and how he has mellowed. The whole extended family is what I would strife to have in my own life.
Hey, let them think whatever they want, PC. Awesome and totally sweet, as always.
I love love this story, you know that don’t you…all the characters are great including Melvin-what a surprise???? My fav is Lottie; my fav couple?…well, thats not hard but Lottie and Jo are shaping up to give em a run for their money huh??? Catch you next week.
i READ this and i loved it, and then i skipped to another story of yours–and forgot to comment. your nc17 is faaaantastic. heh;) you make me LIKE tina and bette together which is a HUGE feat my friend. good work, and keep it up. very cute…
Oh BTW, forgot to say – don’t skip the night, wanna read about Lottie/Jo :o))
Awww I love this story – loved the Bette/Lottie talk which was needed, love your Tina and looove Lottie/Jo – so fucking cute :o)) More, more, more of this story, pleeeaaaase (okay I just begged I think LOL)
Love this, love this, love this! Even better without the sniffing and all those tissues around!… “Promise me this will never stop”… such a great line…. I’m glad that Bette and Lottie finally “really” talked. I think that Bette should offer Tina her mother’s ring. It would be symbolic and right the wrong…. Anyway, thanks for this chapter, I just came back from a vacation and found it… It was a great surprise! ;)
That was wonderful!