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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 2

    Story written on July 6, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Author Notes:

    Kit worries about Bette (continued immediately from the last chapter)

     

    Bette moves to pass Kit and head for the bedroom, but Kit quickly catches her arm and pulls her over to the couch and sits. Bette, reluctantly, follows suit.

     

    Bette: Really Kit I need to sleep.

     

    Kit: No, Bette. This is important.

     

    Bette: Well Im not really in the mood to talk.

     

    Kit: Well then youre just going to sit there and listen. I dont need to remind you what alcohol can do to a person.

     

    Bette (interrupts) Kit I dont need a lecture

     

    Kit (interrupts) Apparently you do. People who drive under the influence need lectures.

     

    Bette: It was just this one time.

     

    Kit: Bullshit.

     

    Bette: (angry) Excuse me? How the ***** would you know? Have you been following me?

     

    Kit: No, I havent. (sighs) Look I dont want to lecture you. I..I know that youre having a rough time.

     

    Bette: Im fine.

     

    Kit: Bette, come on Baby girl, this is me youre talking to. All Im saying is alcohol isnt the answer. Trust me on this one. In the long run, itll only make things worse.

     

    Bette: Ill take that into consideration. (pauses) Can I go to bed now?

     

    Kit: No. I want to know why youre doing this to yourself.

     

    Bette: Im not doing anything, ok? I had a bad day. End of story. Goodnight.

     

    Bette got up and walked into her bedroom without a word and shut the door, effectively ending their conversation.  Unsure if she should stay or go home, Kit hesitated at the front door a moment, before locking it and heading towards the spare bedroom. She was only asleep a few short hours when she was woken suddenly by a crash in the kitchen. She rushed in to find Bette on her hands and knees clumsily trying to wipe up the remnants of a half empty broken bottle on the floor. A broken bottle of Jack Daniels.  In all the times Kit had seen Bette with an alcoholic beverage in hand, she had never seen her drink hard liquor.

     

    She kneeled down in the mess to help Bette, who was obviously having trouble cleaning up. She briefly wondered just how much of the bottle Bette had poured for herself before dropping it. Kindly she took the towel from Bette.

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    3. I was looking to see if you posted and to my supris there it is , i love this story and i hope that Bette fights hard for Tina and does’nt just sit back and do nothing. Looking foward to more

    6. K
      Great chapter. Poor Bette. I like the emotion from her in this. Things just didn’t happen the way I thought they would on the show. I like this better :)

    7. oooh…first to post! Again!
      hahahaha “Tina’s sleeping with Franklin?”…that’s great. I love Kit, she’s too funny. So I gather that whole “Bette brings Tina flowers at teh C.A.C, goes off on Helena, and finds out about the pregnancy” doesn’t happen in your story? I like the flashbacks, are you going to have one when she finds out about the pregnancy?
      I’m glad Kit’s there for Bette. Hope the girls come around. Haha, like Bette said… they could call her, or mail her, or stop by and see her.

      Great update. Can’t wait for the next installment (we will find out why Bette’s at the doctor, right?)

    9. Damm girl this shit if fucking great, I’m glad kit is there so bette can vent.
      Ok so maybe if you stop proofreading your writing so much you could post sooner?? Just a though. I don’t care if you mis spell a word, or don’t have a coma. LMFAO at kit’s “tina’s sleeping with franklin”

      You left us with a cliffy don’t tell me your one of those mean writer who likes to make us sweat for the next update LOL, don’t worry I will still be here waiting for the next one.
      YOUR doing a great job!!!

    10. I love your version. I love Bette and Kit’s interaction, that was something the show was missing last season concerning Bette’s affair.
      I can’t wait for the next installment.

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