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The Conversion
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Bette: You are nice and warm my dear. Thank you for keeping the bed warm.
Tina: Do you think it’s time to get up?
Bette: Normally, I would say yes. But with the weather outside and limited electricity, I would suggest we stay put a little while longer.
Tina: Good plan.
Bette: You know, we should have left the room door open so the heat from the fire place would flow into the room.
Tina: Well, I stayed nice and comfortable last night. How about you?
Bette: I was very comfortable. You are an excellent bed buddy.
Tina: Well, so are you. No wiggling, no cold feet, and you don’t snore. What more could you ask for?
Bette: I could think of a few things… but we won’t go there.
Tina: You are so funny Bette Porter. Do you smell that?
Bette: Did you poot?
Tina: No silly, I smell food and coffee. Andy and his staff must be preparing breakfast.
Bette: Yes, I smell it. I could use some coffee right now, but I do not want to get up just yet. This feels too good.
Tina: Well, a few more minutes and then I am going to get up.
Bette: Okay…
We got up about an hour later. We quickly dressed putting our jogging suits with sweat shirts on. I decided that since we were bound to be indoors all day, I decided to wear my house shoes rather than put on regular shoes. When we emerged, everyone was sitting in the dining room having their breakfast. Andy invited us to join them and quickly got us some coffee.
Tina: Its warmer out here than in the bedroom.
Andy: That because you left your door closed overnight. If you had opened your door, the heat from the fireplace would have circulated more into your room.
Tina: Well, I slept just fine. I was perfectly comfortable. It was just when I got up and was dressing that I notice the chill in the room.
Andy: Here is your breakfast ladies. We are going to limit our duties today. Normally we would change the beds, but we are going to put that off until the electricity returns unless there is a particular problem that we need to address.
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Jeez!?,
I’ve only read the first paragraph and am welling up….how do you do that?
I can’t think of a time when they are not together.
I’ll continue reading now, tough beginning though
I’ll comment on the flip side
Thankyou for all your incredible stories Martha…your a f@@king Rockstar
Well, what a story, I really enjoyed it.
I love how they meet, their time at Camp David and the natural progression they took together.
Try really are perfect for each other and your story certainly reflects that.
I still can’t bear to think of them not being together!
Thank you so much, a beautiful story.
I look forward to the next one.
Janice24,
First of all this story is an alternative time and life for our Bette and Tina. The story is being told by a woman who is older (85 years old) and has experienced a full and joyful life with the woman she loved. They have had more than 40 years together even though they didn’t meet until they were middled aged. I like that they took the time to get to know one another for a few days before charging into a romantic relationship. I like that Bette insist that Tina think about her own life and if she is prepared for the changes which will occur as they start to see each other romantically. Bette wants Tina to make her decision about her life knowing the possible downside. For me, that shows immediately how much Bette respects and cares for Tina right out of starting gates. I also like that Bette insist they talk about things fully as they go. She seeks out Tina’s boundaries and comfort level before they do anything. This is why their relationship is so strong…. they hide nothing from each other.
From the idea to publication, I took 4 days… I enjoyed writing this story because I could see that both Bette and Tina would go from a mundane life to a life of love and devotion within a matter of weeks. And it would result in a lifetime of happiness. Isn’t that what we all want in our lives?
Thank for reading and for commenting on this story… until I saw your comments, I didn’t think anyone had read it…. Thank you for your support and encouragement…
OMG! How did I let this gem get past me. I loved every word. I would love to read something else from you, thank you so much for your talent.
OneStorm1 – Thank you for reading… I published this a little more than a year ago and I posted it this year on Achieve of Our Own. I do have three long book stories which is a single series and one other one shot which is about the same length as this one. I then not to writer about angst and problems between Bette and Tina. I think there are plenty of authors who present those kind of stories. All my published stories are on this website. Go to the story search page, put my name in under author (Martha3128) and they are all listed.
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