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The Conversion
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Tina: Are you sure you’re okay.
Bette: Tina, I think you have just fucked my brains out. That is the strongest orgasm that I believe I have ever experienced. I’m okay… I’m a whole lot better than just okay. I didn’t expect that. You are good sweetheart.
Tina: Beginners luck… sorry sweetie, I was beginning to think we were going to need an ambulance. I have never seen that strong a response.
Bette: I’ve never had that strong a response. And you did it so quickly too.
Tina: Was it okay?
Bette: Tina, that was the equivalent of a rookie getting up for his first professional game and it just happens to be the World Series and you hit a grand-slam homerun on the first pitch. It doesn’t get any better than that. Yes, you were good. Amazingly good. If it were any better, you would be burying me tomorrow.
Tina: Oh Bette, you have an amazing body. Your breasts are perfect size and the nipples are so responsive.
Bette: Sweetie, come and kiss me. I am still in the afterglow here. I want to get to know your body a little as well. But I need to rest a little while first. Are you okay with that?
Tina: Oh yes sweetie. Let me get the comforter and you just relax and sleep. I’m right here with you.
By the time that I got us covered up, Bette was asleep. I felt a little neglected, but I was so pleased to have her in my bed. And then I thought about what just happened. I just brought a woman, a beautiful woman to full climax. And woman who had a lifetime of sexual experiences with other women And I she said it was a better than good experience. And I so enjoyed what I did….
Sometime in the middle of the night I felt Bette pull close to my back and start to gently rub my abdomen underneath my pajama top. Her hands were venturing up my torso and were headed toward my breasts. She found my breasts and cupped the lower curves and pull her torso into my back while holding on to my breasts. She then began a soft massage and thumbing my nipples. I was awakened as I could feel Bette kissing my neck and ear and feeling my breasts. Oh my god, it felt so good.
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Jeez!?,
I’ve only read the first paragraph and am welling up….how do you do that?
I can’t think of a time when they are not together.
I’ll continue reading now, tough beginning though
I’ll comment on the flip side
Thankyou for all your incredible stories Martha…your a f@@king Rockstar
Well, what a story, I really enjoyed it.
I love how they meet, their time at Camp David and the natural progression they took together.
Try really are perfect for each other and your story certainly reflects that.
I still can’t bear to think of them not being together!
Thank you so much, a beautiful story.
I look forward to the next one.
Janice24,
First of all this story is an alternative time and life for our Bette and Tina. The story is being told by a woman who is older (85 years old) and has experienced a full and joyful life with the woman she loved. They have had more than 40 years together even though they didn’t meet until they were middled aged. I like that they took the time to get to know one another for a few days before charging into a romantic relationship. I like that Bette insist that Tina think about her own life and if she is prepared for the changes which will occur as they start to see each other romantically. Bette wants Tina to make her decision about her life knowing the possible downside. For me, that shows immediately how much Bette respects and cares for Tina right out of starting gates. I also like that Bette insist they talk about things fully as they go. She seeks out Tina’s boundaries and comfort level before they do anything. This is why their relationship is so strong…. they hide nothing from each other.
From the idea to publication, I took 4 days… I enjoyed writing this story because I could see that both Bette and Tina would go from a mundane life to a life of love and devotion within a matter of weeks. And it would result in a lifetime of happiness. Isn’t that what we all want in our lives?
Thank for reading and for commenting on this story… until I saw your comments, I didn’t think anyone had read it…. Thank you for your support and encouragement…
OMG! How did I let this gem get past me. I loved every word. I would love to read something else from you, thank you so much for your talent.
OneStorm1 – Thank you for reading… I published this a little more than a year ago and I posted it this year on Achieve of Our Own. I do have three long book stories which is a single series and one other one shot which is about the same length as this one. I then not to writer about angst and problems between Bette and Tina. I think there are plenty of authors who present those kind of stories. All my published stories are on this website. Go to the story search page, put my name in under author (Martha3128) and they are all listed.
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