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The Courtroom
In the bathroom, Tina helps Angelica into the tub. Angelica splashes the water, giggling as she makes little waves.
Angelica: Mommy, why hair get all wet when use wawar?
Tina smiles, taking her daughter’s messy curls in her hands as she carefully rinses them.
Tina: Because water loves your hair, sweetie. It wants to make it shiny and pretty.
Angelica scrunches up her nose, giggling again.
Angelica: Is da wawar gonna go night-night too, Mommy?
Tina laughs, shaking her head as she helps Angelica rinse off.
Tina: No, baby, the water doesn’t need sleep. But you do Let’s get you out and dressed.
Once Angelica is dressed in a cute little dress, Tina carefully brushes through her hair, making it nice and neat for daycare. Angelica wiggles around, trying to avoid sitting still for long, but Tina manages to finish quickly.
Tina (with a smile): You’re ready to go, sweet girl.
Angelica looks up at her with a proud, mischievous grin, pleased with how her hair looks.
Angelica (with a grin): I look pretty now, Mommy?
Tina chuckles softly, smoothing down her daughter’s hair one last time.
Tina: You always look pretty, Angie.
As she finishes up, Tina can’t help but feel a sense of quiet satisfaction, the routine comforting even in its familiarity. The day is about to begin, and despite all the changes, Tina knows she’s doing the best she can for her children.
Tina walks into the kitchen, gently guiding Bradley with one hand and Angelica with the other. The morning feels soft and peaceful, with the scent of breakfast filling the air. She leads them both to the table, placing their breakfast in front of them with a smile.
Tina (cheerfully): Alright, breakfast is ready, my loves!
Bradley, full of energy, hops into his chair with a big grin. He immediately starts poking his cereal with his spoon, making playful shapes in the milk.
Tina (laughing): You sure do know how to make breakfast fun, don’t you, Bradley?
Bradley looks up at her with a mischievous twinkle in his eyes.
Bradley (grinning): I’m making a monster See?
Tina smiles, her heart melting as she watches her son’s creativity shine through even at this early hour.
Tina (smiling): That’s a pretty good monster, sweetheart. Now, eat up, okay?
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(9 votes, average: 4.78 out of 5)
A great start to this story! I’m hooked already. I really like the part where Bette addressed the judge and then Tina spoke directly to her. And the part where Bette whispers to herself that she’ll bring them back together.
Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your story here!
Thank you so much, I’m so glad you’re hooked already. That moment between Bette and Tina was really important to capture, so I’m thrilled it resonated with you. There’s definitely more to come, and I can’t wait for you to see how their journey unfolds. Thanks for reading and for your kind words
Wow, you’ve hooked me from the start! The emotions you’ve poured into the page are super intense! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I’m so happy to hear that the emotions came through I really wanted to make this scene feel intense and real. Can’t wait to share the next chapter with you, Hope you enjoy what’s coming next
Oh dear, I just found your story today. Great start, well it’s sad, but I think Bette will do everything she can to win Tina back. What’s with the name Bradley Knox..What’s with the difference in the last name if these are Bette’s children? Please continue this story. Can’t wait for a new chapter. WE WANT MORE…FAST, FAST,FASTER. Lol
I’m so glad you found the story and are enjoying it so far. Yes, Bette is definitely determined, but whether that’s enough…. well, you’ll have to wait and see. As for the last name his full name is Bradley Knox Porter. He’s the son of both Bette Porter and Tina Kennard. More will be revealed soon, I promise new chapters are coming, Thanks so much for your support
Amando essa história. Por favor não nos deixe esperando muito tempo por uma atualização.
I’m so happy you’re loving the story, New updates are on the way. Thank you for your love and support.
Welcome to the site!
Great start. I’m looking forward to seeing how Bette will to try to win Tina back.
Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Bette definitely has a lot to prove, and it’s going to be quite a journey. Hope you stick around to see how it all unfolds.
Welcome.
A great start but more is needed to and as soon as possible!
SG
Thank you for reading, More is definitely on the way.
Welcome.
A great start but more is needed and as soon as possible!
SG
Good start to this story, I am hooked like a magnet.
I’m thrilled to hear that, Hope you enjoy what’s coming next stay tuned.
This is a great story! Nice job!
I must tell you, accidentally I stumbled on this one on another website and there this first chapter is much much longer, with Tina’s POV. Can you fix that, for other readers here, please?
Thank you so much
I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story and yes the longer version with Tina’s POV was part of an extended draft I shared elsewhere. I’ll definitely update it here too so everyone can get the full experience from both perspectives.