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The Courtroom
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Tina laughs softly, rubbing her daughter’s back in the same comforting way she always does.
Tina (playfully): Alright, five more minutes, then we’re getting up, okay? Just five.
Angelica’s only reply is a small, contented murmur as she rolls back into her pillow, letting out a sleepy sigh. Tina shakes her head affectionately.
She heads back to the kitchen to prepare breakfast while Bradley finishes up his morning routine. Tina quickly sets out two bowls one for Bradley with his favorite cereal, and one for Angelica with extra honey on her oatmeal, just the way she likes it.
As she works, Tina finds herself thinking, yet again, about how different mornings have become. The absence of Bette’s presence still weighs heavily on her, but for now, all she can do is focus on making sure the kids have what they need. The rhythm of their morning routine is comforting, even if the silence in the house is loud.
Tina calls toward the hallway, her voice soft but firm.
Tina: Angie, are you up, sweetie?
Angelica’s voice floats from the other room, still drowsy with sleep.
Angelica (sleepily, with a little whine): ”Mommy… I no weady yet…
Tina chuckles softly, her heart swelling with love at her daughter’s reluctance to leave the warmth and comfort of her bed. She pauses for a moment, savoring the sweet sound of Angelica’s sleepy protest. After a few seconds, Tina lets out a soft sigh and heads back toward the kids’ room.
She walks to Angelica’s bed, gently leaning over to wake her up. Her little girl stirs, her face scrunching in protest as she groggily pulls the blanket tighter around her. Tina strokes her messy blonde hair, trying to coax her out of sleep.
Tina: Come on, baby. Time to get up now.
Angelica, still half in dreamland, grumbles and rolls over, trying to hide her face under the pillow.
Angelica (with a pout, eyes still closed): ”Five more… Mommy, pwease…”
Tina laughs softly and shakes her head. She gently pulls the covers off Angelica and scoops her up, cradling her in her arms as she carries her toward the bathroom.
Tina (affectionately): Alright, sweetie. No more sleepies. Time to get up.
Angelica grumbles but doesn’t protest much more. Tina sets her down near the bathroom sink, where she picks up Angelica’s favorite little brush, handing it to her.
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A great start to this story! I’m hooked already. I really like the part where Bette addressed the judge and then Tina spoke directly to her. And the part where Bette whispers to herself that she’ll bring them back together.
Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your story here!
Thank you so much, I’m so glad you’re hooked already. That moment between Bette and Tina was really important to capture, so I’m thrilled it resonated with you. There’s definitely more to come, and I can’t wait for you to see how their journey unfolds. Thanks for reading and for your kind words
Wow, you’ve hooked me from the start! The emotions you’ve poured into the page are super intense! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I’m so happy to hear that the emotions came through I really wanted to make this scene feel intense and real. Can’t wait to share the next chapter with you, Hope you enjoy what’s coming next
Oh dear, I just found your story today. Great start, well it’s sad, but I think Bette will do everything she can to win Tina back. What’s with the name Bradley Knox..What’s with the difference in the last name if these are Bette’s children? Please continue this story. Can’t wait for a new chapter. WE WANT MORE…FAST, FAST,FASTER. Lol
I’m so glad you found the story and are enjoying it so far. Yes, Bette is definitely determined, but whether that’s enough…. well, you’ll have to wait and see. As for the last name his full name is Bradley Knox Porter. He’s the son of both Bette Porter and Tina Kennard. More will be revealed soon, I promise new chapters are coming, Thanks so much for your support
Amando essa história. Por favor não nos deixe esperando muito tempo por uma atualização.
I’m so happy you’re loving the story, New updates are on the way. Thank you for your love and support.
Welcome to the site!
Great start. I’m looking forward to seeing how Bette will to try to win Tina back.
Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Bette definitely has a lot to prove, and it’s going to be quite a journey. Hope you stick around to see how it all unfolds.
Welcome.
A great start but more is needed to and as soon as possible!
SG
Thank you for reading, More is definitely on the way.
Welcome.
A great start but more is needed and as soon as possible!
SG
Good start to this story, I am hooked like a magnet.
I’m thrilled to hear that, Hope you enjoy what’s coming next stay tuned.
This is a great story! Nice job!
I must tell you, accidentally I stumbled on this one on another website and there this first chapter is much much longer, with Tina’s POV. Can you fix that, for other readers here, please?
Thank you so much
I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story and yes the longer version with Tina’s POV was part of an extended draft I shared elsewhere. I’ll definitely update it here too so everyone can get the full experience from both perspectives.