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The Courtroom
Angelica (her eyes wide with excitement, can hardly contain herself): I go down the biiiiig slide, Mommy It soooooo high, and I be super fast.
She rushes through her words, barely taking a breath, her hands fluttering as if she’s already climbing the slide.
Angelica: I slide down like whoooooosh! I hav sooo fun
Her grin spreads from ear to ear, her enthusiasm bubbling over.
Angelica (looking up at Tina with her big, round eyes): Mommy, Is Mama coming to pick us up today?
Tina’s heart twinges at the mention of Bette. She pauses for a moment, the question pulling at her in ways she doesn’t want to acknowledge. She forces a smile, the familiar ache rising in her chest.
No, sweetie. Mama’s very busy today. But Kit will be there to pick you up, okay?
Angelica seems satisfied with the answer, her face lighting up as she nods enthusiastically. Bradley, too, accepts the response, though Tina notices the lingering look in their eyes whenever Bette is mentioned. It’s a longing she feels deeply, and her heart tightens as she watches them, knowing how hard it must be for them too.
As they finish getting their coats on, Tina helps Angelica with her shoes, Bradley is already tying his shoes with his usual care, his concentration so serious that Tina can’t help but smile.
Just as the last of the jackets are zipped up, Kit steps into the room. Her voice is gentle but filled with concern.
Kit (her expression soft yet thoughtful): Tina, Can I talk to you for a second?
Tina turns, glancing at Kit as she finishes zipping up Angelica’s coat. Kit watches them for a moment, her eyes filled with unspoken understanding. Tina knows her sister in law well enough to see the concern etched on her face.
Kit (quietly): Are you sure this is what you want? I know things have been tough, but you and Bette… you’ve been through so much together. Are you sure about walking away?
Tina’s heart lurches, and she looks down, blinking away the tears that threaten to form. She pauses, the weight of Kit’s words sinking in, but she knows she has to be honest.
Tina (steadily, her voice tinged with emotion): Kit, I’ve thought about it. I’ve thought about it a lot. I can’t keep pretending everything is fine when it’s not. I need to put the kids first now. Bette… Bette has her own journey to figure out, and I can’t wait anymore.
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(9 votes, average: 4.78 out of 5)
A great start to this story! I’m hooked already. I really like the part where Bette addressed the judge and then Tina spoke directly to her. And the part where Bette whispers to herself that she’ll bring them back together.
Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your story here!
Thank you so much, I’m so glad you’re hooked already. That moment between Bette and Tina was really important to capture, so I’m thrilled it resonated with you. There’s definitely more to come, and I can’t wait for you to see how their journey unfolds. Thanks for reading and for your kind words
Wow, you’ve hooked me from the start! The emotions you’ve poured into the page are super intense! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I’m so happy to hear that the emotions came through I really wanted to make this scene feel intense and real. Can’t wait to share the next chapter with you, Hope you enjoy what’s coming next
Oh dear, I just found your story today. Great start, well it’s sad, but I think Bette will do everything she can to win Tina back. What’s with the name Bradley Knox..What’s with the difference in the last name if these are Bette’s children? Please continue this story. Can’t wait for a new chapter. WE WANT MORE…FAST, FAST,FASTER. Lol
I’m so glad you found the story and are enjoying it so far. Yes, Bette is definitely determined, but whether that’s enough…. well, you’ll have to wait and see. As for the last name his full name is Bradley Knox Porter. He’s the son of both Bette Porter and Tina Kennard. More will be revealed soon, I promise new chapters are coming, Thanks so much for your support
Amando essa história. Por favor não nos deixe esperando muito tempo por uma atualização.
I’m so happy you’re loving the story, New updates are on the way. Thank you for your love and support.
Welcome to the site!
Great start. I’m looking forward to seeing how Bette will to try to win Tina back.
Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Bette definitely has a lot to prove, and it’s going to be quite a journey. Hope you stick around to see how it all unfolds.
Welcome.
A great start but more is needed to and as soon as possible!
SG
Thank you for reading, More is definitely on the way.
Welcome.
A great start but more is needed and as soon as possible!
SG
Good start to this story, I am hooked like a magnet.
I’m thrilled to hear that, Hope you enjoy what’s coming next stay tuned.
This is a great story! Nice job!
I must tell you, accidentally I stumbled on this one on another website and there this first chapter is much much longer, with Tina’s POV. Can you fix that, for other readers here, please?
Thank you so much
I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story and yes the longer version with Tina’s POV was part of an extended draft I shared elsewhere. I’ll definitely update it here too so everyone can get the full experience from both perspectives.