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The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five
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“Nothing’s going to happen that you’re not comfortable with.” said Bette, as Tina pulled back to look at her.
“I know, I just got a little anxious.”
“I’m not going to hurt you.”
“I know, it’s just that…”
“It’s just what T?”
“What if I don’t know what to do, what if I don’t live up to your expectations.”
“Babe, you’ve already exceeded any kind of expectations that I ever had about finding the woman of my dreams.” said Bette, looking away slightly.
“Is that what I am?” asked Tina, touching Bette’s face so that she could look into Bette’s eyes again.
“You’re everything to me.” confessed Bette.
“Then make me your everything and more.” said Tina, her intentions made plain to Bette.
Bette reached up to Tina’s face, stroking across Tina’s cheeks before moving closer and closer, before the first touch of their lips. Like their kiss in the doorway, it was gentle at first as if both women were feeling their way into the journey that they were taking. Tina put her arms around Bette’s waist and then moved her hands towards Bette’s lower back, pulling on her so that their bodies moulded together, not a millimetre between them. Bette sunk her tongue into the deep recesses of Tina’s mouth, running it along Tina’s teeth before beginning a dual with Tina’s tongue for dominance.
Bette remembered all the times that she said that she would wait for Tina. That she was in no hurry, that she would be patient for Tina to be in a place where she was ready. How glad Bette was that the night had finally come. She so wanted Tina to surrender to her, to feel how much Bette loved her, and how much she wanted to please her and yet, with Tina’s tongue in her mouth, she had a pretty clear idea that it was she that was going to be doing the surrendering. There was something persuasive about the way that Tina knew exactly where to put her hands, her mouth, that made Bette’s head swim.
While Tina’s mouth was fully engaged in kissing Bette’s mouth she felt a primal need to get even closer. The doubt in her mind being overruled by the need in her body to explore Bette’s body. She reached for the bottom of Bette’s shirt and started to tug it out of her jeans. Tina felt the whimper that came from Bette more that she heard it. Once the shirt was free from the confines of Bette’s jeans Tina ran her hands across the skin of Bette’s stomach, feeling the muscles twitch as she went along. Tina brought her hands from within Bette’s shirt up to the top button. Her hands shook as she tried to undo the buttons that were between her and Bette’s skin. Bette moved her hands to cover Tina’s, to stop the shaking.
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alrighty then, Trying to catch my breath here citygirl, Love your writing
What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.
Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!
OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.
Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!
Wow, great chapter mate! Enjoy your weekend!!
I’m ignoring the harsh truth that I know is coming, for now, and concentrating on just how incredibly amazing this was…
You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.
Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!
I can’t keep reading these stories at work…ya’ll are killing me…amazing City….amazing!
You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!
Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.
Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.
finding the woman of your dreams. did that this year. how cool is that. thanks
So nice to return from a vacation have your writing to read extending the joy just a little bit longer. : )
I wish that your story would remain this content and happy. You always end up breaking my heart and leaving our girls without the other.
awesome- love your story.
great job with this story, and a great chapter, but i think it just got a lot hotter in here!!!
Awesome!!
Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )
Damn that was hot and awesome love it. Please post soon please, thanks!