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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five

    Story written on November 8, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    The sights of LA rushing past her.

    “Do you want me to do it?” asked Bette, gently.

    “No, I just…”

    “You know we don’t…”

    “Bette, I want to, more than I think that I can tell you. I just can’t stop my hands from shaking.”

    “Because you’re nervous?”

    “Because I want you so badly.” smiled Tina, finally getting the top button undone.

    After that Tina’s progress was smooth, and when the bottom button was finally undone she pushed the shirt off of Bette’s shoulders, gasping slightly at the sight of Bette only in her bra. Tina traced the line of Bette’s bra, her fingertips touching the soft skin. Tina was wide-eyed with the knowledge that soon she was going to be looking at what was underneath that piece of material. Bette looked on, loving the way that Tina explored her with her hands and with her eyes. When it became to much for Bette she took Tina’s hands away from her breasts and led her into the bedroom. Bette just couldn’t wait any longer to see the vision that she had dreamed of ever since she had met Tina.

    Bette turned as soon as they were in the bedroom, meeting Tina’s lips with her own in a scorching kiss. It would have lasted forever if they didn’t both have to breathe. When they both pulled back Bette lifted Tina’s t-shirt over her shoulders, she had to feel Tina’s skin against her own. She pushed Tina back against the wall of the bedroom, momentarily forgetting her promise to herself that she would take things slowly. For Bette there was only one thing on her mind, she had to satisfy her craving for Tina. Bette kissed along Tina’s jaw line and then down her neck, alternating between kissing gently and sucking the creamy white skin into her mouth, hard enough so she knew that it would leave a mark. She revelled in the sounds that were coming from Tina, groans of pleasure as Bette took her fill.

    Bette was then taken completely surprise. She felt Tina move her hands up towards her shoulders but wasn’t prepared for Tina pushing her backwards towards the bed. Tina fixed her with a stare that made Bette’s heart race. She couldn’t ever remember anyone looking at her with such lust, and yet the look was also laced with a trust that said ‘I know you’ll look after me’. Tina moved closer and reached behind Bette, her hands reaching for the clasps of Bette’s bra while her mouth was dangerously close to Bette’s ear. The hot breath driving Bette wild. There was a brief moment where Tina didn’t think that she would be able to get the bra undone and then it came loose in her hands. Something in Tina’s mind told her that there was no going back now.

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    2. What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.

    3. Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!

    4. OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.

    5. Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!

    8. You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.

    9. Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!

    11. You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!

    12. Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.

    13. Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.

    20. Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )

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