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    The Most Distance Course

     

    Chapter 26 Somewhere in the time

     

     

    “Bette? Bette? Bette Porter!”

    Being startled out of impassivity, Bette covers up her embarrassment by several coughs.

    “Hey, Al.”

    Alice Pieszecki, Bette’s best friend, one of the members of the old group “The Golden Circle”, now being one of the famous reporters in West Hollywood. Basically, she can earn a very good amount of money only by writing a simple article.

    “Jez, where are you, you seem like drifting away!”

    “Sorry, where are we?”

    “We are talking about your promotion! Bette! You’re barely listening, right? Dane?”

    The other brunette nods. Dana Fairbanks, she is Alice’s girlfriend, a professional tennis athlete, won dozens of trophies, endless sponsors and a large crew of fan club.

    “Huh?”

    “Y-o-u-r p-r-m-o-t-i-o-n, Bette. There are no other people can be an official detective in such a young age like you! It’s a huge honor!”

    Dana looks at her girlfriend’s best friend, she might not as fast reaction as Alice, the great and subtle observation she has instantly sense that something’s wrong with the beautiful woman.

    “Bette?”

    Bette turns her head. “Yes, Dana?”

    “Are you happy?”

    Bette gulps, she looks straight at the athlete. Her new friends’ face might seem innocent and naïve, but those eyes…those eyes are sharp and direct, the dark pupils are distant and firm, just like Tina.

    Tina…Tina Kennard, the love of her life…

    “Bette?”

    “What? Al? What?”

    “Are you even listening?”

    “Listening to what?”

    “Dane just asked you a question.”

    “She did?”

    “Duh!”

    “Sorry, Dana.”

    “No worries,” Dana smiles.

    “What happened to you? Bette? You always seem to have a far-away look in your eyes.”

    “Honey, leave her alone.” Dana warns.

    “What? Now you are on her side?” Alice argues. “You suppose to support me.”

    “I do support you, but not now.”

    “Why not now? You knew Bette, you knew how she just disappeared nowhere for more than a year, and later she suddenly appeared in front of us as if nothing happened, she didn’t even want to tell us what the hell happen and what did she do or where she went to! And it’s been like what? More than three months? Still won’t say a word!”

    “Maybe she needs time, baby.”

    “It’s been a fucking long time, Bette. Now you’re getting the promotion for no reason, the Casanova seldom get laid, you are not the player like the old time, you even decline the girl I’ve introduced to you! It’s really hurt my feelings!”

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    Comments

    1. JBLH says

      I had to read through some parts a few times to try to understand what was going on in this. But I’m still a bit confused as well. From what I’ve gathered, Tina is still clearly alive but we just don’t know why her and Bette are separated and why Bette can’t find her. Was the note about the address something recent that Tina sent to Bette? And if it is, why isn’t Bette using her skills to find it!!!

      I know Tina would probably have to be in hiding but I don’t understand why she would be MIA to Bette.

      Also please don’t let Bette go see Candace, that is something I’d rather not relive again lol. Thanks for posting!

    2. Zhenya says

      Absolutely agree with all what said JBLH – i’m too confused about all of this questions – how they separated and why Bette not try to find Tina?
      And i also agree about Candance – maybe in this story Bette would be woman enough and not sleep with her

    3. Finn422 says

      I have been confused many times in trying to follow this story! There are so many story lines that are incomplete, missing information for me to draw conclusions or follow the logic of the writer. This entry is no different. I enjoy being left with a cliffhanger or being left wanting more. I am tired of having to go back and read again believing I missed something only to realize it isn’t there. I have decided to give up! I am finished with this story! Sorry, I wanted closure and I can’t see it.

    4. Bibi28 says

      Hi CJ,

      Amazing chapter and i am sure you will reveal what happened with Tina. For me it was not a chapter that confused me, maybe for the others because you switch from present time to what happened 3 months ago. But you used a different type style for it.

      Why didn’t Bette looked for Tina already, hmm, i think because of her time spent in the hospital and it doesn’t seem wise that they see each other that soon, it could bring them both unwanted attention. Tina needs to hide for awhile and i believe Tasha is with her.

      Where ever Tina is, i hope she gets the help and support to fight the drug addiction as well for the deep trauma’s she went through all her life.

      And please, please i beg you to let Bette not be involved with Candace, other than as a friend and boss.

      I love Dana, a true friend. Alice is getting on my nerves, she never knows when to stop talking, she has a good heart but doesn’t know when to support a friend by just giving a hug or be still.

      I am looking forward to the next chapter, please update asap!!!

    5. proteonomics says

      Hi CJ:

      Great chapter, Oh my God, you are good at making me feel enthralled in this story. Now I want to know more about how Tina escaped.
      I want you to know that I’m not confused, with your writing, on the contrary, I understand your style and I know this story is non-apt for people with heart disease.
      What I understand very well is that Bette and Tina survived the attack of the Cooper’s fortress, and that, thanks to God, Sebastian Cooper is dead and hopefully deep in hell.
      I believe that Tina and Bette are far away from each other because of their safety and I believe that Tina is still working on her revenge against the bad guys.
      I don’t like Bette accepting Candace invitation, but I expect that ‘nothing’ happen in their meeting.
      Oh my God, that Alice; I have read many ‘Alices’ characters in different stories here, but this Alice I really don’t like, but it’s fine with me if you keep her so vain and stupid (any way someone has to be the ‘dumb guy’, right?)
      Well, CJ, thanks for the chapter and I’ll be waiting for the update eagerly.

      P

    6. BAT2012 says

      CJ, this story is so intriguing. Thank you for keeping us guessing, but you are slowly filling in the pieces. Wherever Tina is would make sense that Bette wouldn’t know because she has to be in hiding. Aaron can’t be trusted that he would not use Bette to find Tina if they were to get together now. The authorities have to be convinced that Jodi is Justine and that Bette hasn’t turned. She’s still playing a part and Tina is still pulling strings behind the scenes. Kelly’s money is probably paying for Tina’s treatment and setting up her new life. I understand Bette’s suffering and agony because Tina was in such bad shape when she had to let her go. She has to trust that Tasha, Shane and Carmen are taking care of her and getting her off the drugs. They are both broken, but they were reunited before, I believe you will bring them back together again. I also hope Tina has something special planned for Aaron. He needs to suffer and be destroyed. Please come back soon. Like everyone else I hope Bette doesn’t get sexually involved with Candace. Alice is an ass, always thinking that all Bette’s problems can be solved by getting laid. She’s not a true friend, and maybe Tina should take care of her too. :-)

    7. SassyGran says

      Hi,

      Sorry I have to join the majority in being confused.

      I am finding the extreme anxiety over Tina and Bette too much.

      I find the slipping back and forth between timelines not enjoyable although I realise this builds tension in the story.

      I think the fact that we now have Candace entering the story the final straw especially as she would seem to be Bette’s Senior.

      I like Bette and Tina together fighting the odds not separated so I think I have found the Course just too Distant for me.

      Sorry,
      SG

    8. Jane says

      Thank you to all who responded. I’m not the only confused person here and I won’t be following this story due to too many disconnects and loose ends. However I do appreciate the author’s efforts.

    9. Zhenya says

      Hmm. i see a discussion there. Than i must say that even if i confused in some parts of this chapter i’d like to read future chapters. So i’m hope author will continue this story.

    10. Angel1981 says

      Thank you for the chapter!

      Yeah, this part left many questions, but i hope we’ll have answers in future chapters.
      Second – like all i hope Bette have anough dignity not to sleep with first woman who approach her – Candance.
      And the last – Alice is totally jerk. And i don’t understand how Bette keep her friendship with such person.
      Waiting for the next!

    11. Silentreader says

      Happy to see an update.
      I havent finished reading it..and wondering what happened with Tina after FBI attacked, hope you didnt kill her tho…lol
      Anyway..thanks for keeping up with the story

      • Silentreader says

        Finally finished reading it..
        I see lot of people felt confuse ..
        But i have to say i enjoy every moment reading your update..
        I think you try to build a thriller story with some riddles in it..leaving a small amount of trails here and there..
        Rise up the tense, very intriguing
        Made us wondering what had happened with Tina after the attack, where did she go, why she stayed away from Bette, would she be okay, what would happened next, how she would be able to come back into bette’s life without everyone knows who she was, how she could pass all the trauma from her past life..
        And agreed with everyone..scratched the idea of bette have any intimacy with candace please…i dont know what did bette see in her could be compare with tina in the first place..
        Please continue this story, no matter how much headache you would get from setting the plot.. lol

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