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The Most Distance Course
Mr. Wang leans his chin on his hands.
Shane’s mouth slightly raised.
Tom Mater’s blood just not yet to dry.
Though some process did strike terror into all of them, eventually, everything, went the way just as Tina planned.
Even the other five people didn’t understand a word Bette had said, but through the changing expression on Chinese boss’s face, all the people on site know clearly… while other Cooper staffs are just returning from the shock, Bette has just taken over the position of the Cooper drug lord.
After a long pause, Mr. Wang stands up, looks like he has already made up his mind.
With a contented smile on his face, Bette steps forward to greet the Chinese boss and shakes hands with him.
“I have to say, I was really impressed by your sincerity and candid.”
“We’ve already wasted a lot of your time, sir, it’s no use to beat about the bush.”
“It sure is.” Wang smiles.
He likes this girl, her attitude and tone are above flattery, it’s respect.
Hong Kong has been looked down by white people since the colony, very few white skins will take the Chinese culture seriously, no need to say they will learn the language obtained the world most difficult.
There is a saying goes by Goethe ”Those who know nothing of foreign languages know nothing of their own.”
This girl not only knew how to speak Mandarin, but she has also really understood the Chinese’s nature, she knew how to deal with them, mostly, she sits as equals with the Asian at the same table, rather than reckon themselves as the higher group. With that wisdom and sincerity, she just earns the trust of the biggest gangster in China.
“Tell me, Ms. Priston…”
“Please, call be Bev.” Bette smiles brightly.
Wang laughs.
“You are very smart, Bev, and brave, I like you kind of woman, it’s hard to find in these days.”
“I’m flattered,” Bette says. “I hope my word didn’t offend you.”.
“Believe me, Bev, you are very much better than your leader.”
Wang looks at Tom Mater’s body with disdain, who is now turning cold on the ground, Bette can’t help but shiver. Once a drug leader sits up high in a leading position, with no one dares to put a hand on him while he died.
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Zhenya says
Thanks for the chapter!
I comment again, when i read it
Bibi28 says
Sad to hear you are sick, take care.
I will read and comment today or tomorrow.
Zhenya says
Ok, so what can i say
First – i don’t like Sam – seems in the future will be problem with her.
Second – Tina too deep in the criminal world. Maybe she’s not killing people, selling druds and etc by own hands, but she taking orders to do that. And for me it’s even worse.
Third – i don’t like that Bette helps to sell even more drugs sealing deal with chinese.
I love Tibette but if in the end Bette will have to choose – be with Tina and become criminal like her or on law side – i would like that she chose law.
Waiting for the next!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for the comment.
As you can see, this is a part of the plan, I’ve implanted lots of clues in it, which will tell you what is going to happen next. And of course, I will explain what Tina is plotting, maybe three or two weeks later.
Personally, I believe Bette didn’t want to be a criminal also, but sometimes, being in that kind of situation, committing a crime is the only way to survive.
Love your loyalty for Tibette, don’t worry, the truth will reveal very soon.
Angel1981 says
Hi!
I have not good feeling about Tina’s plan because she practicaly sent Bette in the trap. What if Bette can’t reach agreement with chinese boss? Tina can’t be sure she can. Than basically they all would killed by chinese.
Thank you for the update and i hope you feeling well!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Angel1981:
Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big group like Triad.
Thanks for your comment and hope you like it.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Angel1981:
Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in te business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gang like Triad.
Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Angel1981:
Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gangster like Triad.
Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for the comment.
As you can see, this is a part of the plan, I’ve implanted lots of clues in it, which will tell you what is going to happen next. And of course, I will explain what Tina is plotting, maybe three or two weeks later.
Personally, I believe Bette didn’t want to be a criminal also, but sometimes, being in that kind of situation, committing a crime is the only way to survive.
Love your loyalty for Tibette, don’t worry, the truth will reveal very soon.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Angel1981:
Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big group like Triad.
Thanks for your comments and hope you like it.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Angel1981:
Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gangster like Triad.
Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Angel1981 :
Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gangster like Triad.
Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.
proteonomics says
Hi CJ:
Okay, let me see if I am understanding what it is in this thriller chapter :
Tina or JC knows already that Bette is police working with the FBI.
Sam and Shane are in Tina’s side and Sam partially knows Tina’s plans.
‘L’ has been captured (or is allied) of Tina, because Sam mentioned, ‘thanks to L giving us the chance to find out who these people are and the true identity of Bette Porter’; does that means that the others traveling with Bette and Shane are also related to the FBI?
Apparently, this was Tina’s plot to rid of Tom, right?
I’m not sure, but being as smart as she is I doubt Tina is telling every point of her plan to Sam.
Fantastic; waiting for the next one.
Thanks.
P
Crystal J.H says
Hi proteonomics:
L has not been caught, he is a two-sided character in the organization. He is an undercover but also providing Tina the information from the cops. Those people who went to the business trip were not the FBIs’ but they did have the record working with the police.
Yes, Tina’s plan to kill Tom, in my word, is murder a person with a borrowed knife.
Sam is an interesting person in this story, I will mention it in the other chapter.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for the comment.
As you can see, this is a part of the plan, I’ve implanted lots of clues in it, which will tell you what is going to happen next. And of course, I will explain what Tina is plotting, maybe three or two weeks later.
Personally, I believe Bette didn’t want to be a criminal also, but sometimes, being in that kind of situation, committing a crime is the only way to survive.
Love your loyalty for Tibette, don’t worry, the truth will reveal very soon.
Crystal J.H says
Hi proteonomics:
L has not been caught, he is a two-sided character in the organization. He is an undercover but also providing Tina the information from the cops. Those people who went to the business trip were not the FBIs’ but they did have the record working with the police.
Yes, Tina’s plan to kill Tom, in my word, is murder a person with a borrowed knife.
Sam is an interesting person in this story, I will mention it in the other chapter.
Bibi28 says
Hi CJ,
Very interesting chapter!
You already answered some questions the others brought up, so i am gonna wait for the next chapter.
I really love this story!!!
I hope you feel better soon!
Crystal J.H says
hi Bibi28:
Thanks for the comment, still working on the next, please let me know if you have any ideas or opinion!
Your replies always a big help!
Jane says
Great story and thanks for writing. Hope you are better. I hope I don’thave to wait until my next birthday before Tina and Bette make their relationship less formal and no business!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Jane:
Thanks for the comment, when is your next birthday? I hope I didn’t write too much before that.
Jane says
You have luck and time on your side. My bd is in December and I’m a fun loving Sagittarius♐️ I’m not going to outthink you and speculate on what will happen next. It’s YOUR story and I’m going to sit back and wait until you add more. Thanks for a great read ????????
DumplinT says
could be way wrong, but I think Justine(Tina) is in the biz to bring down her murderous, whimp of a dad! We were 1st introduced to Tina as a petrified 5yr old who watched her Mother blown to smitherines by a ruthless FBI agent and the stew kicked out of her by the same. That same asshole cursed her and said she was “just like father”, remember that? Anyway, Gangster dad ran to save his own ass. We later see Tina as a tender-hearted teenager who did her best to protect the Aunt who took her in. She went out of herway to mind her own business and just get thru high school. After the humiliation and betrayal of trust by Bette and her hateful, phony friends, Tina was once again thrust into a kill or die world. I totally understand the unemotional, cold heart that Tina now has. Still think she is working with the mystery man L. Hmmm remember the kind-hearted FBI agent that tried to protect little Tina? Finally, when Bette found “herself” only moments from CERTAIN execution by gangster Wang, she used all the knowledge&skills she had to talk her way out!!!! She had NOT set out to replace drug lord Tom Maynard but essentially that’s what happened!!! Hmmmmm Tina teaching her a lesson???? Or cleverly drawing her into the inner circle so perhaps she can reveal more??? Wonder if Bette will learn that she doesn’t and isn’t suppose to have all the answers
Crystal J.H says
Hi DumplinT:
Wow! Thanks for summing that up! I was so grateful you read my story well!
As for your comment, I have to say, this is not the original crime story just like you said, everything happened was part of the plan, I won’t tell too much to ruin the surprise later on. But indeed, Bette truly found herself in this business, but no, Tina didn’t teach her a lesson, but she did let Bette take the place for some reason.
I hope you like this story, and thanks again for your comment. Hope to see you next week, your comment really does help and give me the courage to keep writing.
SassyGran says
Well this story really keeps the Writer on her toes!
In no way can it be termed ‘light reading’!
I almost love the Comments as much as the posts!
My love of Tibette makes me anxious at times but I will keep the faith. I cannot believe that Tina is as bad as she seems and await the reveal of her true identity. I also wait for Bette to get stronger.
Anyway this is not my Story it’s your’s and I love reading it. I await, with bated breath, the next post.
Sorry you’ve been ill and trust you are recovered.
Please post soon.
SG
Crystal J.H says
Hi SassyGran:
I am sorry to let you feel this way, it not my intention to make the reader have those feelings.
I love Tibette very much, and please have faith that everything will be in the right way, Tina has to do this thing for the proper reason, I will explain it.
As for the hard to read story, I believe all sufferings have their reward, and something can go on while developing their love.
Thanks for the comment and hope to see you next week!
SassyGran says
Don’t regret my feelings!
As I said I love the story and reading it.
I have faith.
Looking forward to next week’s post.
SG