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The Most Distance Course
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The blonde raises her one eyebrow, Bette sighs.
“Please?”
“No hard feelings?” Tina raises her the other eyebrow.
“Pfft, of course not.” Bette says, but looking at Tina’s eyes, she gives up again. “Fine, maybe a little.”
“That’s good for me.” Tina laughs out loud. “Alright, alright, stop looking me in that sad puppy dog eyes, I will tell you.”
“Yes, please.” Bette says like a small child, Tina looks at her in amusement, she bites her lips again to stop her laughing.
“Wow, you really do want to know, huh?”
“You have no idea.” Bette says. “So…? What did you see in my eyes?”
With a big turn, Tina pulls the steering wheel back to the middle.
“Sadness, I saw sadness,” Tina says quietly. “Just like what I felt when I first being bullied, I remembered that when I checked my wounds by looking at the mirror, I would see the same feelings in your eyes when Adele was bullying someone.”
Bette chuckles. Ah-Ha!
“This time, you’re wrong,” Bette says happily. “I didn’t feel sad about it, I mean, it’s not me being bullied, how come I will feel sad about it?”
“Did you feel happy about those victims? About what Adele did?”
“What?” Bette is taken aback. “No, of course not…I—”
“Have you ever been taken advantage of by Adele before?”
Bette opens her mouth, she wants to protest, but nothing comes out her mouth. She never mentioned to anyone that Adele used to have threatened her, she only wrote it in her journal, how can this girl know about it?
Tina sees her face, she knows she already got the answers.
“We’re here.” Says Tina, she parks the car in front of a small metal-sheet house. “Welcome to my humble abode.”
“Thank you, for letting me stay.” Bette says.
Tina smile, she’s a shy girl with not so many words. Bette finds out that when this petit girl smile, her eyes sometimes change in green color.
“Hey, Tina?”
“Yeah?”
“Can I ask you one more question?”
“Are you sure there’s only one more?” Tina teases, Bette’s face blushes. “I’m messing with you, you can ask me anything.”
“What did you mean we are not the only one?”
Tina bits her lower lip, sighs, her face show no happiness. “Apparently, not something that I’m proud of.”
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Having seen Laurel’s Blood Ocean in real size I find it difficult relating it to it’s fictional place in your story but that does not detract from my liking of this story and your portrayal of Tina. Laurel is, however, very different from the part of Tina that she played in the L word and perhaps future references to Tina’s Art should have different Titles to the real ones. Just a thought and not a criticism.
Enjoying this Story and look forward to your next posts.
SG
Oh CJ, what a incredible chapter!!!
The song you used, wow!!!
I didn’t see Laurel’s painting in real life and it is a beautiful one, the meaning behind it is powefull.
I agree with SG that for the futere you can better name the paintings different, but i love that you wanted to refer to such a great woman as Laurel.
Thank you for the update!
Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!
I don’t understand what problem with my previous comment and why it went to trash.
P.S. Not problem – i already restored it
“Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!”
Hi CJ:
Great story, I like how both girls share their ‘secrets’ and how good Bette fits in Tina’s world; I hope she will be strong enough to keep her real personality when they return to class.
I feel pity for Tina’s aunt, who has cancer and I’m concern that Adele and Kelly, knowing she has a job as a cleaning worker at Kelly’s residence, they will hurt her.
I agree in many points with SG and Bibi, in each story we have here in LesFan, we have many different Tinas and Bettes, and all of them, different from the show TLW, and that is wonderful; for me, it’s like multidimensional versions of what they represent for many of us, excellent
Thank so much for this update, waiting eagerly for the next one.
P
Love how smooth you bring your story..
Feel sorry for Tina for all her miss fortune in life…my heart ache for her sadness..
Wondering how you will finally connect Bette n Tina as couple with the strong bullier against them..
Waiting forward for the next chapter.. :)