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The Most Distance Course
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“I told you no need to worried, Chrissy.” Tina’s aunt grins, she turns her head to Bette. “Ever since I’ve been diagnosed with cancer, Chrissy insisted that she’ll cook every day, we seldom have guests, please forgive us if we have not looked after you well.”
“No, no, no please don’t say that Mrs. Kennard, Tina is a really good cook, the pleasure is all mine.”
Tina smiles proudly, she laughs at Bette now chewing happily like a satisfied kid.
“Why thank you, since they are the cheapest food material, you have to make some changes to avoid tired of those taste, it’s one of the poor people’s specialties.”
“Well, after tasting what you made I’m kinda starting to suspicious about the ability of my cook.” Bette says as she eagerly puts all the food in her mouth and hands the empty plate to Tina, rumbling: “CanIpleasehavemore?”
Tina and her aunt both laugh at Bette’s craziness.
The dinner is full of laughter and happiness, it’s been a long while for Bette to enjoy such a great meal, no rubbish words, no gossips, just sweet talking. Through all those years, she finally feels the feeling of family and friend.
Tina takes Bette to her room and shows her the bed.
“Sorry about the small bed, we couldn’t afford anything bigger.”
“Please don’t say so, this is perfect, I should be the one who’s sorry to steal your bed tonight.”
Tina smile without saying other words, she makes the bed and clean up some space for Bette, during the meantime, Bette is wandering in Tina’s small room and looking at the drawings. Some are sketches, some are oil paintings, almost fill the entire room.
“Wow…”
Her attention is being caught by a beautiful painting on the wall. The canvas was painted in ocean blue, with some red spots on it. Unlike the usual, the strong contrast of color makes the work balance between passion and peace, so many emotions pour out from a single painting, sorrow, confusion, pain…all mix in one piece, but Bette senses more sadness inside the artwork.
“Blood Ocean,” Tina says as she steps beside Bette, checking on the drawing. “One of my favorites.”
“You drew this all by yourself?”
Tina nods, cannot take her eyes from the painting. “Drawings makes me calm, I got my patience during the painting.”
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Thanks for posting.
Having seen Laurel’s Blood Ocean in real size I find it difficult relating it to it’s fictional place in your story but that does not detract from my liking of this story and your portrayal of Tina. Laurel is, however, very different from the part of Tina that she played in the L word and perhaps future references to Tina’s Art should have different Titles to the real ones. Just a thought and not a criticism.
Enjoying this Story and look forward to your next posts.
SG
Oh CJ, what a incredible chapter!!!
The song you used, wow!!!
I didn’t see Laurel’s painting in real life and it is a beautiful one, the meaning behind it is powefull.
I agree with SG that for the futere you can better name the paintings different, but i love that you wanted to refer to such a great woman as Laurel.
Thank you for the update!
Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!
I don’t understand what problem with my previous comment and why it went to trash.
P.S. Not problem – i already restored it
“Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!”
Hi CJ:
Great story, I like how both girls share their ‘secrets’ and how good Bette fits in Tina’s world; I hope she will be strong enough to keep her real personality when they return to class.
I feel pity for Tina’s aunt, who has cancer and I’m concern that Adele and Kelly, knowing she has a job as a cleaning worker at Kelly’s residence, they will hurt her.
I agree in many points with SG and Bibi, in each story we have here in LesFan, we have many different Tinas and Bettes, and all of them, different from the show TLW, and that is wonderful; for me, it’s like multidimensional versions of what they represent for many of us, excellent
Thank so much for this update, waiting eagerly for the next one.
P
Love how smooth you bring your story..
Feel sorry for Tina for all her miss fortune in life…my heart ache for her sadness..
Wondering how you will finally connect Bette n Tina as couple with the strong bullier against them..
Waiting forward for the next chapter.. :)