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The Most Distant Course
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“How’s your chest, by the way?”
“Still hurt sometimes, but it reminds me that I am still alive…so, I have nothing to complain about.”
“Tina was an expert at shooting.”
“She sure was.”
A few months ago, Carmen’s execution.
“The boss wants me to ask if you bring your gun.”
“I did.” Tina took out a TT-33 pistol from her belt, she handed it to the bodyguard.
The huge man took it, while he’s taking a close look at the gun, Tina turned her head to Sam, the servant quickly steps forward to her.
“Everything’s ready, ma’am.” Sam said, she gave Tina a thoughtful glance.
Tina nodded, she then turned to the bodyguard.
“Any problem?” Tina asked.
“Not at all, everything’s fine.” He returned the gun to Tina.
“Thank you, Max.” Tina said with a tone of no thanks, took the gun with the left hand.
Waited until the bodyguard walked away from them, the blonde took a deep breath and stuff the gun into her left belt…
A wind blows through, the coldness makes her button up her overcoat, which also covered the twin guns on both side of her waist…
During the interrogation.
“I don’t know what the fuck you are talking about!” Carmen yelled. “Everything you said is full of shit, it is you who want the fucking throne! And you set out the trap, trying to kick away adversaries by letting them take the blame…”
“Shuts the fuck up!” Tina snapped out, she pulled out the gun from her right-side belt, the other gun, the gun that Max didn’t check.
She pointed the gun to Carmen’s head.
“I was not the only one knew about this, you knew it!”
Carmen tried to grab Tina’s clothes, but Tasha was faster. Right before she’s going to touch Tina’s, she already grabbed the brunette and throw her few feet away near the river. With a small cracking sound, Carmen winced in pain, some part of her body should be broken…
Tina slowly walked close Carmen, she squatted down in front of the Latino, who was struggling to balance her body not to fall in the mud…
“Unless you want to give us the name of your accomplices, there must be more than one rat like you, am I right?”
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Wow…I didn’t know that the previous chapter would bring up so many comments. First of all, I’m going to say sorry to all the readers about the title, it’s not a good one and misled most of you guy to think that this was the last chapter. No, I will not end in this way, and I promise you guys to give you a proper ending.
And for those who gave up this story, I just want to say that thank you for supporting this story before and I’m sad to hear that my story upset you. Most of the writers on the Lesfan are unprofessional and were probably just writing for fun or for other sake. But there’s no doubt that we all love Tibette and we want to make these amazingly beautiful relationship continue. I believe that no matter what happened to them, Bette and Tina always belong together, as long as we have fate for them.
As for the previous chapter, there were two reasons that I wrote in that way, first was that my friend read the story and probably due to my poor English and lack of choice of words, they felt bored and unable to read the rest of it, so I’ve decided to change the writing style. And for other reason, I didn’t want to waste time writing about the details about what happened in the Cooper mansion, I think it’s time to make a closure and slowly bring the normal life back to the characters.
Thank you for spending such a long time to read this note, and for those who always and still support this story, I appreciate so much, it was all of you to keep me writing and decide to go on finish the story.
Any comment or message help the writers to maintain the passion to write.
I hope you like this chapter.
CJ
Hi CJ,
Thanks for your note on explaining. I think it isn’t nessecary, it is your story and i truly enjoy it and am very happy that you put your self out as a author and try to entertain us Tibette lovers. The most important is that you keep having fun to continue to write.
Everyone is allowed to give their opinion, but i very much dislike how some of them comment. We should encourage you and other writers and thank all of you that you are trying to keep Tibette alive after so many years. If you don’t like a story, why bother to read it and make negative comments.
Ok, this are my thoughts about it.
About the chapter, it cleared some questions and still many more to answer. My heart breaks for Bette, the reason why Tina shut her out and pushed her away after the fall down of Cooper Mansion, i can certainly understand, but still, Bette is suffering and not moving on.
Glad to see Carmen and Shane happy married and a beautiful child.
The teaser at the end has me excited!!! Finally after three years the meet again!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!
Hi CJ:
Very nice chapter, it fills my few questions about what happened with Tina and what was life for Shane and Carmen.
This chapter also confirmed my suspicions about Aaron, I always thought he was a dirty agent, and he got his part of the cake from Cooper.
I’m still thinking of James, the other FBI agent who was very nice with Tina when she was a little child, maybe he is somewhere in this story.
Now we also know about Sam’s secret, so sad for Tina, suffering all her life, just for being the daughter of that son of a bitch of Sebastian Cooper.
I’m still waiting to know what happened to Kelly after she lost the money. And to Adele, after her father killed himself.
I think the story is very good and promises more, Tina has disappeared, but not forever, I think she is looking into solving her business, by the moment.
I think your story is very good, your style is original; and as many of us, (for whom English is not our native language), sometimes is hard to write, even when we love to do so; besides we are not professional writers, some of us write from our hearts, and I know that you do it. But we learn from our mistakes (at least in my case) I am used to taking the comments (nice or harsh) as feedback, to improve my writing style and even my type of stories. I like to think that we all come from different backgrounds but we all respect each other. So, don’t stop writing, please, I hope to read more stories from you, my friend
P
Hi CJ,
I am terribly sorry if there was any confusion on my last comment to how I felt about this story. I just wanted to say how thankful I am that you put your writing out there and have been continually sharing this amazing story with us. I am 100% hooked and with this story until the very end!
You’ve answered a lot of the questions that were running through my mind and although I still have more, I have faith that all will be revealed in good time as it goes with great story-telling.
Thank you so much for continuing this story and I can’t wait to see how these two will reunite! PPS!
Hi! Thanks for the chapter!
I still don’t think that Tina did the right thing when she left Bette in that tunnel
Waiting for the next update!
I misunderstood Thought Tina had locked herself in the tunnel and Bette & Tasha outside the gate so that they could escape
Hi CJ – I’m so glad you decided to come back and continue this story. Thank you for your message and for the new chapter. Don’t be discouraged, you are doing a great job and telling a compelling story with a lot of intrigue. This chapter certainly filled in the blanks on how Bette and Tina were separated and why Bette doesn’t know where Tina is. As I said in my previous comment, I think Tina is recovering and taking care of unfinished business. Your little teaser gives us hope that although it took many years hopefully she is back and they can safely be together. I do worry however, about how Bette managed in those years of separation. It didn’t appear that she was handling her own recovery too well. Hopefully she stayed in touch with Shane and Carmen and was able to get comfort and support from them since she couldn’t share her trauma with her other friends, and she certainly couldn’t trust any of her FBI or Police colleagues. Looking forward to the next installment.
Thank you for the update!
But i don’t understand how much time goes between now and when Tina left Bette in the tunnel.
And second – always fun to read how skinny and androgen Shane in your story always trying to kick Bette ass, who much more physically stronger than her. For me it’s too hard to imagine
Waiting for the next chapter than!
Thanks for coming back and clarifying some of those outstanding points.
The teaser makes me look forward to the next post and hopefully more explanation on this most distance course.
Thanks again for posting and please keep writing – you cannot please all of the readers all of the time you know.
SG