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The Most Distant Course
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“That is impossible,” The driver cuts in, he pulls out his phone. “I just used it not long ago, it was still working at that time.”
On the other side of the lake house, Peggy and Helena Peabody both look down from the top, they are both chuckling while seeing the other two women waiting impatiently for another car.
“Lucky we are hiding here, mommy, if we were on our way back to the city, Faye Buckley is definitely going to snatch our car.”
“It’s good that you are clever, the mountain roads are deserted and you’ve cut down the signal, the other car will need more than a few minutes to be here.” Peggy lets out a sigh. “Don’t know what is going on in the San Diego Police Department jail…”
San Diego Police Department jail.
“How is it?” One of the police asks.
“Did you find them?”
A new bunch of FBI agents rushes to the front door of the San Diego Police Department jail, they are all fully armed, guns and bulletproof vest, they are ready for a fight.
The interesting thing is that…among all the reinforcements, none of them are police officers but the FBI.
They just got the message that someone is rushing into the Police Department, not really sure what’s happening.
“Where are they?” Aaron Kornbluth is taking the lead of the support group.
An officer who was in the Police Department when the rebels broke in stands to the front, and has his face covered with dust, replies confusedly, for what happened earlier, and for the arrival of the entire crew of the FBI.
“Sir, we didn’t find anything, they just disappeared into nowhere. What do we do now?”
“Are you saying that nobody from the rebel forces has been caught? Not any of them?”
“The officers who were responsible for catching the thieves suddenly appeared when we were trying to chase those rebels, how should we chase? Everything happened of a sudden, those bastards ran away quickly and separately, we have no idea which direction should we chase.”
Aaron grabs the officer’s collar. “You asks me? Who do I ask?”
At the same time, a luxury car pulls up in the front door of the Police Department, the loud noise of the breaking sound is so sharp that catches everyone’s attention.
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Wow….So sweet! Get a doctor Bette!!! Why is it so hard for Bette to see that she fucked up? Is she so self absorbed that she cannot see how wrong she was and how sick Tina is? I love that Tina is so forgiving and that they truly want to be with each other. So now get her covered up and then go get one of the others, possibly Tasha, to get a Tina a doctor. Then stay by Tina’s side until she gets better. Surely there is something that can be done to relieve the fever and other symptoms. To complete this mission, they need a healthy Tina.
Wonderful maneuvers by the rescue squad…..I may have bonked Candace on the head as well before leaving.
Great story…..
Martha3128:
I’m flattered, thank you for the comments. There will be more chapters coming up and I’m looking forward for them.
Tina is surely smart, but weak, while Bette is somehow an idiot but strong enough to protect her, they are like two different people but suitable for each other. Tina cannot saved Shane without Bette’s team and Bette cannot beat Faye on her own. Some might think I treat Bette too harsh, but i believe without the comparison, the story will not be interesting.
Thanks again for your comments, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Hi CJ,
It is always such a pleasure to read this story!
Love how they won the first round and saved Shane!
And so good that the gang let Bette see sense and apologize to Tina and they are going to marry, yes!!!
Now let Bette use her fine brains and not doing something stupid like going after that bitch alone. She thinks to much with her emotions.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Bibi28:
It’s really not an easy chapter to read, I was so afraid that some of the readers would be bored by it or even think it’s to complicated. So glad that you think it’s good.
Tina and Bette engaged was the biggest dream among all the Tibette, people might want to see their wedding in the new show but since the trailer coming out it’s disappointed us. I was hoping I can make this possible.
Anyway, thanks for your comments, Bibi, always.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter, finally Shane is free, No doubt, Tina was very smart.
The rescue team did what it was the best, escaping from the trap and going to the right place.
Bette is correct on being ashamed of her behavior with Tina, really Bette, don’t say ‘i didn’t mean it, it wasn’t me’ if it wasn’t you, who the hell was, damn, Bette.
The question now is how they are going to explain that Shane was rescued from a place she wasn’t supposed to be, how Candace and Buckley will explain that Shane was somewhere else, not even Aaron knew.
Great chapter, my friend, please post soon the new one.
P
proteomics:
Well, Bette was a smart idiot I have to say, she’s been spoiled since her childhood and it’s not easy to change of the personality we’ve built when we’re young. I don’t blame Bette, but I will hate her if the new show comes out if she betrayed Tina.
The next chapter will be even more complicated, just like you’ve said, how should they explain Shane’s rescued by others? Do have faith in her, Bette might be an asshole sometimes but she’s also smart, beside, she has Tina by her side.
Thank you for your support, my friend, I will be looking forward for your new chapter.
CJ
What a chapter! I am so relieved that Shane and Tina’s people didn’t get blown up or captured. Faye Buckley and Aaron is still plotting against them and I really like to see Bette use her brains and training to work with Tina to come up with a foolproof plan to get Faye and Aaron put in jail forever.
Wonderful to see Bette and Tina are engaged. I hope Tina gets well and they get some couple time.
Jordan Springs:
Tina is indeed very smart and always come up with a best plan for her team, I’m glad that you like this chapter, it might not be easy for most people to read cause rely a lot of thinking. And you’re right, the next chapter is for Bette, about how she deal with the senator, I’m afraid Tina and she won’t have lots of time of their own.
Thanks for the comments and for liking this story, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Great Chapter!
I could shake Bette!
Please get a Doctor to Tina, I cannot bear it if she dies!
Thanks for posting, please post again soon.
SG
SassyGran:
It’s been a long time to see you! Thank you so much for the comment. And don’t worry a tiny bit I will never let Tina die.
There were lots of things happened in the recent chapter, and surely more to come out, hope to see you next time, thanks again!
CJ
I have had some health issues to deal with but hope they are dealt with.
My main problem was my moving home and being without Internet Access for a few weeks! Didn’t realise how much I would miss it!
SG