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The Most Distant Course
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With no less than a few seconds they were nowhere to be found.
“We thought that since the bomb will not explode on them, we did not light the bomb.”
“Then we wanted to capture someone alive, but who would think they… they had dispersed poisonous smoke making the route impossible to see.” Another officer cut in. “I’m really sorry, but we’ve tried and still couldn’t stop them.”
“So you just do nothing? No even chasing them?!” Candace asks angrily.
“We did chase them, relentlessly, but once out of the Department, a bunch of police officers surged out, and kept shouting to catch the thieves, making a big mess out of the situation…After that…after which it became like this.”
Candace doesn’t want to hear anymore, she turns to the senator, who remains extremely quiet ever since they arrived at the Police Department.
“Mother, Tina Kennard planned the prison break with such big fanfare, but in the way that the actual breakout did much ado about nothing and ended confusingly?”
Faye Buckley’s eyebrows furrow deeply.
“Justine Cooper’s usual conduct does not start with a roar and end with a whimper, unless…” The senator’s face slightly changes. “Unless Peggy Peabody drawing me out of the city was not because of an easier attack…but because they were afraid that I would be on-site to see through their deliberate puzzle…”
“Puzzle?” Candace asks. “Mother, did you mean that Tina Kennard’s actual motive was not to launch an assault on the San Diego Police Department jail?”
“Not actual?” The police officer who answered bursts out. “But Madam Senator, when the bandits attack, it was such a big fanfare.”
The old woman lapses into unwanted sedateness, her brain functions so quickly just the way Tina does.
“A bigger fanfare will attract our attention…and the final goal…is obviously to cover their true operations.”
“True operation?” Candace says. “Mother, this doesn’t bode well. Could it meant that Tina Kennard has found the true location of where we held Shane McCutcheon?”
Faye Buckley’s face changes all of sudden, anger, fear and surprise are all written on her face. Without saying anything, she speeds out from the San Diego Police Department, running toward her car which is still parking outside.
“What the…” Aaron is confused as hell. “Candace, what’s wrong? What did you mean true location?”
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Wow….So sweet! Get a doctor Bette!!! Why is it so hard for Bette to see that she fucked up? Is she so self absorbed that she cannot see how wrong she was and how sick Tina is? I love that Tina is so forgiving and that they truly want to be with each other. So now get her covered up and then go get one of the others, possibly Tasha, to get a Tina a doctor. Then stay by Tina’s side until she gets better. Surely there is something that can be done to relieve the fever and other symptoms. To complete this mission, they need a healthy Tina.
Wonderful maneuvers by the rescue squad…..I may have bonked Candace on the head as well before leaving.
Great story…..
Martha3128:
I’m flattered, thank you for the comments. There will be more chapters coming up and I’m looking forward for them.
Tina is surely smart, but weak, while Bette is somehow an idiot but strong enough to protect her, they are like two different people but suitable for each other. Tina cannot saved Shane without Bette’s team and Bette cannot beat Faye on her own. Some might think I treat Bette too harsh, but i believe without the comparison, the story will not be interesting.
Thanks again for your comments, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Hi CJ,
It is always such a pleasure to read this story!
Love how they won the first round and saved Shane!
And so good that the gang let Bette see sense and apologize to Tina and they are going to marry, yes!!!
Now let Bette use her fine brains and not doing something stupid like going after that bitch alone. She thinks to much with her emotions.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Bibi28:
It’s really not an easy chapter to read, I was so afraid that some of the readers would be bored by it or even think it’s to complicated. So glad that you think it’s good.
Tina and Bette engaged was the biggest dream among all the Tibette, people might want to see their wedding in the new show but since the trailer coming out it’s disappointed us. I was hoping I can make this possible.
Anyway, thanks for your comments, Bibi, always.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter, finally Shane is free, No doubt, Tina was very smart.
The rescue team did what it was the best, escaping from the trap and going to the right place.
Bette is correct on being ashamed of her behavior with Tina, really Bette, don’t say ‘i didn’t mean it, it wasn’t me’ if it wasn’t you, who the hell was, damn, Bette.
The question now is how they are going to explain that Shane was rescued from a place she wasn’t supposed to be, how Candace and Buckley will explain that Shane was somewhere else, not even Aaron knew.
Great chapter, my friend, please post soon the new one.
P
proteomics:
Well, Bette was a smart idiot I have to say, she’s been spoiled since her childhood and it’s not easy to change of the personality we’ve built when we’re young. I don’t blame Bette, but I will hate her if the new show comes out if she betrayed Tina.
The next chapter will be even more complicated, just like you’ve said, how should they explain Shane’s rescued by others? Do have faith in her, Bette might be an asshole sometimes but she’s also smart, beside, she has Tina by her side.
Thank you for your support, my friend, I will be looking forward for your new chapter.
CJ
What a chapter! I am so relieved that Shane and Tina’s people didn’t get blown up or captured. Faye Buckley and Aaron is still plotting against them and I really like to see Bette use her brains and training to work with Tina to come up with a foolproof plan to get Faye and Aaron put in jail forever.
Wonderful to see Bette and Tina are engaged. I hope Tina gets well and they get some couple time.
Jordan Springs:
Tina is indeed very smart and always come up with a best plan for her team, I’m glad that you like this chapter, it might not be easy for most people to read cause rely a lot of thinking. And you’re right, the next chapter is for Bette, about how she deal with the senator, I’m afraid Tina and she won’t have lots of time of their own.
Thanks for the comments and for liking this story, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Great Chapter!
I could shake Bette!
Please get a Doctor to Tina, I cannot bear it if she dies!
Thanks for posting, please post again soon.
SG
SassyGran:
It’s been a long time to see you! Thank you so much for the comment. And don’t worry a tiny bit I will never let Tina die.
There were lots of things happened in the recent chapter, and surely more to come out, hope to see you next time, thanks again!
CJ
I have had some health issues to deal with but hope they are dealt with.
My main problem was my moving home and being without Internet Access for a few weeks! Didn’t realise how much I would miss it!
SG