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The Most Distant Course
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Not even waiting for the driver to open the door, Faye Buckley and Candace jump out of the car immediately, the senator regardless of her high heels runs into the department where all the police officers and the FBI agents are gathered.
“Senator Buckley.”
Seeing the woman, everyone stands straight and salute to the state senator.
Standing in the unharmed San Diego Police Department jail, Faye Buckley’s hawk eyes quickly glancing around the surrounding. But the building and structure, everything stays the same way when she left for Peggy Peabody’s lake house.
If it were not for the wounds and the dirt on those police officers and FBI agent’s uniforms, somehow it might let people believe that nothing had happened a few moments ago.
But Faye Buckley knew, Aaron knew, even Candace knew, a bunch of rebels had broken into the Police Department, brought a huge mess and left without leaving any evidence.
The expression on Faye Buckley becomes more and more serious.
Also sensing the weirdness, Candace looks at the elder woman.
“Mother?”
“What happened? Why is it this quiet?” Faye Buckley asks.
“Ma’am, my apology, but the situation wasn’t as the way we planned.”
“What do you mean not the way we planned? Where are they?” Candace asks eagerly.
An FBI agent stands out.
“After those rebels entered the Police Department, they only advanced till the front door of the jail, but not attempting to break into it. After that, they tried to break their way out.”
Flashback…
One of the rebels who were wearing masks saw they were already in front of the door of the jail, as long as they opened the gate, they could reach the jail, to Shane…or practically, to the deadly bomb trap, Faye Buckley has set for them.
“Let’s go!” Said one of the men.
Though through the mask, his voice was blurry and unclear, yet every attacker seemed like stop at the right moment.
The FBI agent who was ready to press the detonator had seen very carefully. After the signal, all the rebels stopped what they were doing, making sure there was a clear path for a way out, without a second thought, thirty people all rushed out at the same time.
Their move was so organized, fast and with no hesitation…as if they had trained several times. The way they covered for each other showed the trust between these people.
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Wow….So sweet! Get a doctor Bette!!! Why is it so hard for Bette to see that she fucked up? Is she so self absorbed that she cannot see how wrong she was and how sick Tina is? I love that Tina is so forgiving and that they truly want to be with each other. So now get her covered up and then go get one of the others, possibly Tasha, to get a Tina a doctor. Then stay by Tina’s side until she gets better. Surely there is something that can be done to relieve the fever and other symptoms. To complete this mission, they need a healthy Tina.
Wonderful maneuvers by the rescue squad…..I may have bonked Candace on the head as well before leaving.
Great story…..
Martha3128:
I’m flattered, thank you for the comments. There will be more chapters coming up and I’m looking forward for them.
Tina is surely smart, but weak, while Bette is somehow an idiot but strong enough to protect her, they are like two different people but suitable for each other. Tina cannot saved Shane without Bette’s team and Bette cannot beat Faye on her own. Some might think I treat Bette too harsh, but i believe without the comparison, the story will not be interesting.
Thanks again for your comments, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Hi CJ,
It is always such a pleasure to read this story!
Love how they won the first round and saved Shane!
And so good that the gang let Bette see sense and apologize to Tina and they are going to marry, yes!!!
Now let Bette use her fine brains and not doing something stupid like going after that bitch alone. She thinks to much with her emotions.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Bibi28:
It’s really not an easy chapter to read, I was so afraid that some of the readers would be bored by it or even think it’s to complicated. So glad that you think it’s good.
Tina and Bette engaged was the biggest dream among all the Tibette, people might want to see their wedding in the new show but since the trailer coming out it’s disappointed us. I was hoping I can make this possible.
Anyway, thanks for your comments, Bibi, always.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter, finally Shane is free, No doubt, Tina was very smart.
The rescue team did what it was the best, escaping from the trap and going to the right place.
Bette is correct on being ashamed of her behavior with Tina, really Bette, don’t say ‘i didn’t mean it, it wasn’t me’ if it wasn’t you, who the hell was, damn, Bette.
The question now is how they are going to explain that Shane was rescued from a place she wasn’t supposed to be, how Candace and Buckley will explain that Shane was somewhere else, not even Aaron knew.
Great chapter, my friend, please post soon the new one.
P
proteomics:
Well, Bette was a smart idiot I have to say, she’s been spoiled since her childhood and it’s not easy to change of the personality we’ve built when we’re young. I don’t blame Bette, but I will hate her if the new show comes out if she betrayed Tina.
The next chapter will be even more complicated, just like you’ve said, how should they explain Shane’s rescued by others? Do have faith in her, Bette might be an asshole sometimes but she’s also smart, beside, she has Tina by her side.
Thank you for your support, my friend, I will be looking forward for your new chapter.
CJ
What a chapter! I am so relieved that Shane and Tina’s people didn’t get blown up or captured. Faye Buckley and Aaron is still plotting against them and I really like to see Bette use her brains and training to work with Tina to come up with a foolproof plan to get Faye and Aaron put in jail forever.
Wonderful to see Bette and Tina are engaged. I hope Tina gets well and they get some couple time.
Jordan Springs:
Tina is indeed very smart and always come up with a best plan for her team, I’m glad that you like this chapter, it might not be easy for most people to read cause rely a lot of thinking. And you’re right, the next chapter is for Bette, about how she deal with the senator, I’m afraid Tina and she won’t have lots of time of their own.
Thanks for the comments and for liking this story, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Great Chapter!
I could shake Bette!
Please get a Doctor to Tina, I cannot bear it if she dies!
Thanks for posting, please post again soon.
SG
SassyGran:
It’s been a long time to see you! Thank you so much for the comment. And don’t worry a tiny bit I will never let Tina die.
There were lots of things happened in the recent chapter, and surely more to come out, hope to see you next time, thanks again!
CJ
I have had some health issues to deal with but hope they are dealt with.
My main problem was my moving home and being without Internet Access for a few weeks! Didn’t realise how much I would miss it!
SG