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The Most Distant Course
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Dana sits next to her, she’s observing her friend for the entire trip, the athlete is so worried for both of her friends.
What is Tina doing now? Is she alive? Can she tolerate the cold winter?
These kinds of thoughts repeat again and again in Bette’s mind, she has nothing to lose except for Tina and Noah. The detective cares nothing about her career, it is just a title, a name as an identity. With her IQ, she can do anything she wants to do…
But if she loses Tina, her life would mean nothing.
Tina Kennard has changed her life, saved her, and gave her hope…Bette knows she’s done too many stupid things that had jeopardized both of her safety, and now this.
The way to the FBI is no an easy way, she knew it already, and maybe she won’t be able to get into the building, but she has to try. Bette sincerely hopes that someone in the FBI quarters will help her to get to Tina, anyone is fine.
Rubbing her tired eyes, Bette is trying so hard to relax, taking a long deep breath, the detective still needs a few hours to get to Washington D.C, before that, she has to try to sleep. Dana was right, even how hard for Bette is to take a rest, she has to maintain her energy so as to help Tina, it’s no good at all if she’s tired and lack of sleep.
Bette closes her eyes, holding back her tears.
She misses her fiance, her Tina…And she doesn’t think she can keep going on with her life if Tina’s no longer alive…
Her head ached and she wondered idly, doesn’t know how long she’s been thinking, with Tina in her dream, slowly she drifting into sleep by tiredness.
Washington, DC. FBI headquarters.
Several knocking sounds on the door capture both of their attention, Aaron walks in, his face is pale and shows full anger.
Faye Buckley rolls her eyes.
“What’s now?”
“We have been totally tricked by that bitch!”
“Aaron, Didn’t I tell you that do not interrupt me when I am busy?”
“Oh yeah？” The Commander clearly doesn’t like the woman’s attitude. “Well then, I’m sorry to bother you, but what the fuck is going on now?”
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.
Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.
Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.
Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.
CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.
Thanks CJ the story is amazing.
P
Hi CJ,
Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!
Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.
Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.
I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.
But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.
Again, a fantastic story!!!
Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.
Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.
Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.
You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?
What a great Chapter!
So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.
Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!
Post soon, real soon! Please!
SG