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    The Most Distant Course

     

    Chapter 43 Falling Like The Stars

     

    “Morning, baby…”

    “Mmm…”
    I made a satisfied smile and stretched my body; the curtain suddenly opened, a bright light shined into the room, my eyes winced by adjusting the light.

    “It’s a beautiful day, baby.” The person said happily, then a tray appeared in front of me. “I made breakfast.”

    I smiled when I saw who the person was, my smile cannot be any bigger.

    “How sweet of you, baby, you didn’t burn the kitchen, did you?” I teased.

    The woman made a fake humph, she pouted, oh, how cute when she does that, I could always fall for that baby pout.

    “Of course not!” 

    “Aww…someone’s pouting,” I said. “Come here.”

    The woman slowly climbed up onto the bed, carefully not hurting me.

    “Mmm…”

    We kissed, like every morning routine, but I would never get used to it.

    “Good morning, T, how do you and my daughter feel today?”

    “Daughter? Why? You don’t want to have a son?”

    “I do want to have a son, but a daughter is better.”

    Bette Porter, my wife, caressed my already two mouths stomach, she asked with a hint of worry, afraid that I might get morning-sick or whatever discomfort that a pregnant woman might have, even though I’ve told her everything was fine, but nope, the stubborn Bette Porter would not stop feeling nervous.

    “And why is that?” I asked with my hand holds my already ball alike stomach, with the help of Bette, I slowly sat up.

    “We have a son already, a daughter will be perfect, don’t you think?”

    “Uh-huh, and what if he is a son?”

    Bette smiles proudly. “Then he will be as smart as his mama.”

    “Nice safe, Porter Kennard.”

    “Hey, I am sincere!” The detective kissed my stomach and pretending to talk to our unborn child. “If you are a boy, mama B promise to teach you how to be a better man…but first, you have to behave and don’t you dare to hurt your mama.”
    I frowned. “Where did that come from?”

    “I’ve read some paper said that boys have more possibilities to increase pain for their birth mother, if that so, he…”

    “Bette, Bette, that’s ridiculous,” I chuckled. “Don’t be paranoid, come sit with me and enjoy the breakfast.”

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    Comments

    1. Bibi28 says

      Hi CJ,

      What a incredible good chapter!

      At first i thought you skipped the part about Tina’s life in danger and moved fast forward to their future. And oh what a beautiful dream Tina had when she was fighting for her life. That is certainly a part i want to read more about! The interaction and pouting between Bette & Tina and Noah warmed my heart and made me laugh!

      It was a well calculated risk Tina took, but at the end she is the absolute winner!!!

      I hope to read what happened with Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornblunth and of course what happened with Candace.

      I am a little sad that there will be only three chapters more on this incredible story!

      Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent as writer and this story!

    2. proteonomics says

      Hi CJ:

      Great chapter, that was very sweet, like Bibi, I thought that you skipped a whole chapter but then I realized about the wonderful dream of Tina.

      Yes, it was hard but Tima made it, now we want to learn what happened with the evil people what about Buckley, Aaron, Candace.

      I would like to see how the legal situation of Tina will be fixed.

      And of course the happy ending.

      Wonderful story, my friend.

      Thanks and pps.

      P

    3. Martha3128 says

      Love it…after three weeks some of Tina’s superficial wounds and bruises should have healed. The deep wounds and the broken bones probably will take a lot longer. And considering her fragile health, its a wonder she survived at all. Bette needs to heal also. Can’t wait to hear about Faye Buckley, Aaron Kornbluth, and Candace Newell. Oh and what really happened to Shane? Did Max really kill her? Surely not! Is Tina now really in the clear – free to live her life as a normal person? What will happen to Bette and her job? Maybe she will leave law enforcement and do something else? I really hope the Cooper Family chapter is now truly closed.

      This is a good story….I want Tina and Bette to make a home and life together. Thankyou for the update.

    4. SassyGran says

      Great Chapter!

      You had me a bit at sea to start with but glad I persevered!

      Mixed feelings about the story ending but really looking forward to your next post.

      You are a talented storyteller, thanks for posting.

      SG

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