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The Most Distant Course
Betty scrolling through her contacts list, the only four numbers in her list are “The Golden Circle” and her father, the last person she willing call. Bette sighs, but she has no choice now, she presses the call button.
The long waiting is killing her, the sky is getting darker and darker, seeing after all the waiting time and not even a car drive through, Bette is losing her hope.
Her father doesn’t pick up the phone, this is not the news. No matter how many voicemails she left, he never picks up or even calls her back. Until Bette’s cell phone battery died, she neither connect to anyone nor anyone calls back.
The sky is completely dark right now, glad that the light outside the old gas station is still working, Bette rubs her arms and sit down on the sideway. She suddenly regrets wearing so formal tonight, with none sleeves and short dark dress, although she’s not completely in the darkness, the cold is eating her out.
Sitting alone on the sidewalk, Bette buries her head in her knees, tears slowly fall down her check.
Who will have thought that the great Bette Porter, the brilliant member of “The Golden Circle” is now abandoned by her friends and families, pitifully sitting at the end of nowhere, cold and hungry, with no one give a helping hand when she needs.
This will be on the first page of the school newspaper if any Wallace High student sees her be thrown into a panic…the mighty Bette Porter, daughter of the greatest lawyer in town, her reputation and dignity will vanish with a blink of an eye.
Unless someone who is not an ordinary student.
“What are you doing here?” A stern voice says, Bette’s eyes wide open.
She was deep in her thought, she didn’t even notice there was a car passing by. She looks up, an old, ugly truck parking right beside her fancy car, forming a strange contrast. The driver switches off the radio while she stops the car, then the driver looks out the window, makes Bette temporarily shock.
Inside the driver seat, sits the girl with short blonde hair and the hideous green jacket.
And most importantly, the girl has the voice Bette will never forget, the sweet, warm sound own by the particular blonde she has been dreaming to talk to for days.
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SassyGran says
Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Crystal J.H says
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
SassyGran says
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for update!
Zhenya says
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Zhenya says
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Bibi28 says
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
proteonomics says
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
P
Crystal J.H says
Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
proteonomics says
yes, I know