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The Most Distant Course
Bette slowly comes back from her surprised and sees the face.
Tina Kennard sits in the driving sit, her hazel eyes shine with concern, make Bette brush a bit. Her brain is fighting for confusion, half of her brain is so grateful that someone finally find her, the other half it is feeling aggressive and irritating that she showed her weakness in front of this girl, she wants to ask for help but she also doesn’t want to lose face in front of the blonde.
“Tina Kennard?”
“The one and only,” Tina says sarcastically. “You shouldn’t stay here, it’s really dangerous wondering in this place alone, especially the girl like you.”
“Oh, really? Now what, you’re a police officer?” Bette says with disdain.
“Thank god that I’m not, or I’ll have the obligation to help you”
“Why do you even care? Why bother to stop your pathetic looking truck?” Bette fights back, although she knew this is no help for her circumstances, which is also a verbal war she’s never going to win.
“Unlike yours, at least my truck is still working, and since I’m the driver, I can stop whenever I want.”
“So what are you doing here? Oh my god, are you stalking me?”
Tina snorts with disbelieve.
“You really should go check on your Narcissistic tendency, Porter, and no, I’m not stalking you, sorry for letting you disappointed, this road leads to my house.”
“Oh…alright,” Bette says, deep down she’s crying to leave this place, but she has not asked for help for too long, for a brief moment, she doesn’t know what to do.
Tina is taken aback for Bette’s giving up, she frowns by her sudden attitude change, this is not the alpha Bette she knew. The old Bette Porter was full of proud and contempt, but this brunette over here looks so vulnerable and harmless, like a little girl who gets lost and can’t find her mother. Even with so many power and money, right now Bette Porter is nothing different than a normal person.
Tina sighs, she slowly climbs down the truck, walking next to Bette, sits down right beside her.
“Seriously, are you alright?”
Bette nods her head with contempt.
“Yeah, yeah, I’m great! I’m great until my car broke down in the middle of nowhere, my so-called friends Miss Kelly and Adele are all busy having fun in the club, Alice is in New York, my dad was too busy to answer her daughters’ phone and while I wanted to call the car repair center, my phone battery died.”
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SassyGran says
Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Crystal J.H says
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
SassyGran says
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for update!
Zhenya says
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Zhenya says
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Bibi28 says
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Crystal J.H says
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
proteonomics says
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
P
Crystal J.H says
Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
proteonomics says
yes, I know