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The Most Distant Course
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Tina blows a whistle, she scratches her short hair. She turns her head at Bette, the infamous Bette Porter, car’s broken, cold, hungry, afraid and helpless. Tina can see the tears keep on falling from her eyes.
“Why you need to drive here?” Tina asks.
“Kelly picked the club in the next town, this is the closest way to go there.”
“That…was pretty bad.” Says Tina, without any bitterness. “I’m sorry…for what you’ve been through.”
“Don’t be, its just karma, I’ve done lots of awful things, this was probably my fate.” Bette says sadly, she uses her both arms to hug her knees.
“Hey, don’t say that.” Tina looks at the brunette, finding that she’s shaking. “Here.”
Tina takes off her dark green jacket and put it on Bette’s shoulder, Bette’s heart feels so warm for this small gesture, she can smell Tina’s scent from the garment, smelling fresh and amazing.
Bette thinks about the past few months, this is hideous clothes that she used to laugh at with the gang when they first saw Tina, but now this green ugly coat becomes the fire in this awful night.
“Thanks.” Was all she can say.
“It’s nothing.”
They both remain silent, looking at the sun completely disappear in the horizon and the darkness covers the whole planet, suddenly, Bette didn’t feel so afraid like before. She looks back at Tina, she’s wearing a Sleeveless denim jacket, her bare arms leaning on the floor, supporting her body.
“Can I ask you a question?” Bette says.
Tina raises her eyebrow. “Who are you?”
Bette frowns. “Sorry?”
“Basically, the original Bette Porter only give orders, she never asks.”
Bette chuckles at Tina’s confusion.
“I didn’t give orders.”
“Hmm, alright.” Tina nods her head. “Remember Max? The boy whose father is a baker? You told him to bring a Croissant for four of you every morning, and he did.”
“That’s typically a nice asking.”
“Really? So you “typically” got free bread for what…three, four months? And you said it’s a nice asking?”
Bette blushed. “Sort of…yeah?”
“Yeah? Fine, what about Coco? The beautiful girl you guys don’t like, you wanted her to remove all her jewelry because you guys think she’s too shining, Adele even told her Christmas is months to go.”
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Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Hi, thanks for update!
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
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