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The Most Distant Course
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“I was right when I said you are one of a kind, Tina Kennard, you really are an amazing girl.”
“Tell me about it.” Tina scuffs proudly, Bette chuckles at her childish face.
“Yeah, um, so anyway…” Bette takes a deep breath. “Thank you, Tina Kennard.”
“Very well, Bette Porter.” Tina nods her head. “Speaking of which…”
She sighs again, looking at the desolate surroundings and then to Bette’s expensive car. She stands up, going toward the car.
“What happened to your car?”
“I have no idea, it couldn’t start.” Bette says as she wipes away her tears.
“May I?” Tina point at the car hood.
“Sure.” Bette frown at herself, she doesn’t like anyone to touch her car, even her friends, but why did she say so? And next, why does Tina Kennard know anything about cars?
She sees Tina open the hood and buried her upper body inside the car, her petite body almost disappear, with a little cling sound coming from Bette’s engine, seems like she’s working on something.
Bette frowns. “What are you doing?”
“Checking your car, obviously,” Tina shouts without looking up. “This does not happen often, I have to say, your car run out of battery, and you have a problem with your capacitor.”
Bette raises her eyebrows with impress. “How do you know?”
“Cause I work in a car repair center.” Tina says, finally pulls her body out of the car, now her shirts, her face, hair, and hand are all blackened by oil stains.
She wipes out the sweat from her forehead and carefully puts the hood back. She pats the car.
“You need to charge your car and change some components. The good news is nothing serious about your car, just requires some small repair. But the bad news is that I left my tool at the center and it’s now closed. So you probably need to wait until tomorrow.”
Tina speaks like she’s been doing this dozen times, no hesitation or question, full of confidence. Bette didn’t hear what she said about her car after Tina opened her car hood like a car master, she’s already fallen into surprises.
“You can fix a car?”
“Why that sounds so surprising to you?” Tina frowns.
“I mean…you are a student, you are too young to know those stuff.”
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Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Hi, thanks for update!
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
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Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
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