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The Most Distant Course
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Seeing Bette who is now full of embarrassment, Tina feels that it is enough.
“Hey, Porter.” She calls. Bette is surprised, Tina’s voice now turns from full of teasing to solicitude.
“Yeah?”
“Feeling better now?” Tina asks kindly, no teasing, no making fun, just sincere concern.
“Yeah, I am.” Bette smiles at Tina.
Tina smiles back, she nods her head again and turns her thought back to the darkness.
Bette looks at the small girl, Tina’s hazel eyes shine in the dark, this petite blonde seems fearless. She doesn’t like those school girls, toadying, adulating to the members of “The Golden Circle”, she shows how Tina Kennard meant to be. Bette admires Tina’s nerve, her perseverance, even when Adele threated her, she showed no backward, because she believes she’s doing the right thing.
“You seem not afraid of the dark.” Bette asks, her eyes still glue on Tina.
Tina smiles sadly.
“When you can’t crave for hopes to appear, and your life doesn’t less many stars to count, embracing the darkness is the only thing you can do.”
How eager Bette wants to hug this girl, Tina’s words are full of sadness but she never shows in her face. Her hazel eyes betrayed her nothing, no fear, no hesitation, only confident and calmness, Tina has learned never to show vulnerability and weakness during her very young age.
Defeated Adele sure was a good thing, but not a happy one. Being bullies target can never be a thing that is enjoyable, fighting for herself also means that someone is going to get hurt, it’s always double lose.
“Thanks, really,” Bette says. “For staying here with me and…”
“Don’t mention it.” Tina cuts her down.
“No, really, thank you, I never thanks properly to anyone since I join the creepy circle…I have to say I’m not like this before, trust me, I know I was a total asshole to you…others, but I was not born to be one”
Tina chuckles, but without saying anything, she gently pats Bette’s arm to encourage her to go on.
“I’m serious,” Bette says. “It’s just…surrounding by the power, the money and the fame, suddenly you are not yourself, you know what I mean? It’s like it can change me unknowingly, destroy for what I believe was right and do something really horrible, moreover, you never realize that you actually are doing something really bad, but you are happy with it because for you it’s fun, turns out it will cause someone’s life about it! And…and…”
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Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Hi, thanks for update!
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
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