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The Most Distant Course
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Tina quickly squats in front of Bette, hold her hand and softly rubs it, she found they’re cold as ice.
“Shh, Porter, Porter, hey, calm down, breath, just breath.”
Tina uses one hand to hold Bette, another warmly strokes Bette’s cheek, making sure she’s breathing normally.
“That right, atta girl, don’t worry, everything will be alright…”
Now tears are forming in her eyes, she feels like she’s having a panic attack. Tina’s warm hand holds onto hers, her body jolts by this touching gesture.
On the first day she met Tina, she finally understands her life was a complete mess. This girl is so warm and thoughtful, not just fighting for her own but also encourage students to stand up for themselves, the total opposite side of her. Compare to Tina, Bette’ is nothing but a coward, a bully and a girl that everyone fears.
A girl that has no true friend to help her when she really needed a helping hand.
Bette so wants to be in Tina’s position, no need to worried about Adele’s words or speak something wrong, no burden at all, and mostly, she can be herself without being control by anyone.
“God, why I am saying this to you?” Bette couldn’t hold bad her tears anymore, she’s now crying like a baby.
Tina never let go of her, instead, she slowly guides Bette’s forehead to lean on her shoulder.
“You’re just emotional, that’s all.” Tina grins, also blushing when she smells Bette’s scent.
“Is it bad?”
“For others, it might be, but I’m not others so no.”
Bette bursts into a laugh by Tina’s joke, Tina bows back.
“You’re weird.”
“And you’re correct.”
“Is that why you’re so smart? For not being others?”
“Good question…I’m not sure,” Tina fakes a confused face. “But I can guarantee you that you will certainly become smarter if you’re Bette Porter.”
Bette laughs again.
“Oh, I doubt it, there is no one else that can beat your smart ass.”
Tina raises her eyebrows. “So you’ve been checking on my ass?”
Oh, shit. “Uh…umm, that’s not what I meant, what I mean is…”
Tina laughs. “Porter, Porter…cheers, why you always have to take it so seriously?”
Oh, right, she’s messing with me again, well done Porter, well done, you just show how stupid you are.
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Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Hi, thanks for update!
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
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