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    The Promise

    Story written on February 7, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=51982
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    Chapter 23 – A woman who takes things from a man is a girlfriend, but a man who takes things from a woman is a gigalo.

    Alice: So how long is it gonna take to get the truck fixed…

    Alice watched as Shane reached down a plucked a Dandelion from a crack in the sidewalk.

    Shane: Well…Uhm funny you should say that…cuz its gonna…well the thing is….

    Alice: Oh you know what, I forgot to tell you, roses arent my favorite flower.

    Shane stopped walking.

    Shane: Yes they are…

    Alice: No theyre really not

    Shane: No I remember….Lisa got you them, and I even called Bette to double check, she said crimson not red…

    Alice: Shane, they were both wrong…they never bothered to ask me what I liked…

    Shane: Oh…sorry…

    Alice: Dont be, you didnt know…

    Shane: I know…thats why Im sorry…I should have asked you instead of Bette.

    Alice: Its cool, you were just being romantic.

    Shane: I wasnt trying to….

    Alice: Yes you were…and I know you are a hopeless romantic deep down, so dont bother with the tough guy act, it doesnt fool me.

    Shane squinted her eyes at Alice, and started walking again.

    Alice: So dont you want to know?

    Shane: Know what?

    Alice: What my favorite flower is?

    Shane: No….

    Alice: Why not?

    Shane: Ill figure it out on my own.

    Alice: And how do you plan on doing that?

    Shane: The same way Im going to get Elmo to back on my good graces….one day at a time.

    @}~~~~

    Shane, Tina and Alice entered the theater where the poetry reading was held. Alice strategically placed Tina in between her and Shane when they went to sit. She noticed Shane was unfazed by the seating arrangement and grew concerned. After an hour of spoken word, Shanes cell phone went off. She turned to the side and answered it.

    Shane: (whispering) Hey…Yeah…No its fine, Im at the theater on Bernard…Is he okay?…Sure I can bring you back, we should be done in a half hour…No dont call Bette shes at work til eight and this is my job… just tell him to shut up and get here, Im a block away.

    Tina: What does she need Bette for?

    Shane turned to Tina and Alice

    Shane: I gotta run…but I should be back in like 30 minutes so…

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    1. You’re damn right I stopped…I’m falling asleep while typing I’ve been up sinve 430 and i went to bed at 1…a certain someone left dirty thoughts in my head that kept me up all night….~winks to the culprit~ alright I have to drive up to my BF’s wrestling match tomorrow with his whole fam arg! see you in a few

    2. Awe… I can hear Alice’s little heart breaking.. Shane needs to come clean.. as for you my dear.. I am glad you are doing better without that other job..you deserve to be treated with respect…no matter what job you have!!! Good for you.. keep up the great work with this story I am sooo hooked.. and waiting for more.

    3. Hey! well being sick.. drinking too much… then walking home; sounds very familiar lol!
      As for the G/Friend, like everything else it is loong and complicated, but the simplest way to explain wots happening is “kind of”… i know i know vauge, but wot can u do, sometimes u just dont know…
      EXCELLENT chapter! each one just gets better than the last, thanks for sharing ur amazing talent xx

    4. Bette had better spend more time with Tina,she is feeling so alone right now. Shane needs to Just tell Alice that she loves her, Dash is cute. Shane needs to come clean to Al about Cherie. Thanks so much. Yes S2 is to short to not have good writer write. we all love your stories,so dont quit. just keep on.

    5. ahhh dont leave me hanging i want more lol, great chapter. you’ve introduced Dash very well so no reason to be nervous ;) hope you write soon and i really need to write soon to. 5*stars for u!

    6. Well, I hate ending like that. Damw cliffhanger. And I’m going to kick Shane ass if she don’t come clean to Alice fast. I know she love her but Alice is not sure of Shane feeling at all. Do something girl. Now I waiting for my next fix. Soon please.

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