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    The Promise

    Story written on February 7, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 23 – A woman who takes things from a man is a girlfriend, but a man who takes things from a woman is a gigalo.

    Shane: Mmmm…Im wet.

    Alice: We dont have time for that…

    Shane: No…I mean Im wet…you got me …wet from the shower…get your mind out of the gutter….

    Alice: Youre the one who keeps putting it there..Whats in the bag?

    Alice motioned to the bag Shane had tucked under her arm. Shane handed Alice the long-stem crimson rose she held, and opened up the bag. She pulled out two DVDs and held them up triumphantly like a child. Alices face fell at what Shane was holding.

    Shane: I wont lie, I had to get help figuring out what to get…but I was told John Cusack is the man …so I got Say Anything cause Bette said theres this great scene with a boom-box and the guys outside or something (Alice nodded) and then I got High Fidelity cause I know you love music, and Dash said its got great music and its funny (Alice nodded again) ….but then I got this one…

    Shane reached in the bag for the last DVD. Alice squealed and jumped up and down.

    Shane: So I take it Purple Rain was a good idea?

    Alice: Hellz yeah its perfect, they all are….who helped you with this?

    Shane: Dash…I told her you wanted to watch movies and try the talking thing so she helped me figure it out.

    Alice: Remind me to thank her..whoever she is.

    Alice leaned in a gave Shane another kiss.

    Alice: Okay give me a few minutes and Ill get ready. I wanted to walk, its only a couple of blocks.

    Shane: Tonight…anything you want.

    Shane left the bathroom, and picked up Alices discarded clothing around the apartment while she waited. Alice dressed quickly and they were out the door in twenty minutes. They walked down the street occasionally glancing at each other and then looking away.

    Shane: Were still not talking…

    Alice: I cant think of anything.

    Shane: This was never hard before….

    Alice: Did we really talk that much before?

    Shane: You did…I just sat back and pretended to listen.

    Alice went to slap Shane, but she jumped out of her way. They continued to walk down the street, letting their hands brush against each other innocently, neither one willing to pull the other into an embrace

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    1. You’re damn right I stopped…I’m falling asleep while typing I’ve been up sinve 430 and i went to bed at 1…a certain someone left dirty thoughts in my head that kept me up all night….~winks to the culprit~ alright I have to drive up to my BF’s wrestling match tomorrow with his whole fam arg! see you in a few

    2. Awe… I can hear Alice’s little heart breaking.. Shane needs to come clean.. as for you my dear.. I am glad you are doing better without that other job..you deserve to be treated with respect…no matter what job you have!!! Good for you.. keep up the great work with this story I am sooo hooked.. and waiting for more.

    3. Hey! well being sick.. drinking too much… then walking home; sounds very familiar lol!
      As for the G/Friend, like everything else it is loong and complicated, but the simplest way to explain wots happening is “kind of”… i know i know vauge, but wot can u do, sometimes u just dont know…
      EXCELLENT chapter! each one just gets better than the last, thanks for sharing ur amazing talent xx

    4. Bette had better spend more time with Tina,she is feeling so alone right now. Shane needs to Just tell Alice that she loves her, Dash is cute. Shane needs to come clean to Al about Cherie. Thanks so much. Yes S2 is to short to not have good writer write. we all love your stories,so dont quit. just keep on.

    5. ahhh dont leave me hanging i want more lol, great chapter. you’ve introduced Dash very well so no reason to be nervous ;) hope you write soon and i really need to write soon to. 5*stars for u!

    6. Well, I hate ending like that. Damw cliffhanger. And I’m going to kick Shane ass if she don’t come clean to Alice fast. I know she love her but Alice is not sure of Shane feeling at all. Do something girl. Now I waiting for my next fix. Soon please.

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