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The Promise
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Alice looked over at Tina whos face was emotionless.
Alice: Tee?
Tina: Im okay…I need to see this…Ive already prepared myself for the worse…seeing it doesnt make it any better, but it helps me confirm what I need to do.
Alice: You sure you want to go in there and just pretend you dont know?
Tina: Why not? Theyll be pretending theyre not doing anything.
The two woman entered the planet and ordered drinks from Jenny at the front counter.
*****TWENTY MINUTES EARLIER : INTERIOR OF THE PLANET*****
Bette: Okay, so I got the idea from something James said…but basically, I am apologizing for everything Ive ever done wrong.
Shane: So you wrote a letter?
Bette: No I made a list…look.
Bette turned her laptop to Shane.
Shane: Uhm…Bee, you left off at number 1026..how many do you plan on…
Bette: When I say everything, I mean EVERYTHING!
Shane: So what now?
Bette: Ill send the list to you on your laptop.
Shane: Uhhh …so..I …this is how you do e-mail…do I have e-mail?
Bette sighed and shook her head.
Bette: I can just send it directly from computer to computer.
Shane: Oh…well be my guest, but why would I need it?
Bette: Thats the part Im going to need you and Dash for…oh and James, Ill get him to help cause this is getting bigger and better by the minute…but well get to that later, heres what I did last night after I talked to you.
Bette opened another file and Shane leaned in to read. Bette leaned in and whispered in Shanes ear.
Bette: I think you helped to inspire this when you told me how you were feeling last night.
Shane: Me? How?
Bette: I dont know…I just started thinking about how I feel incomplete without her, and how I need her to be the person I am today…then I started thinking about you and all these talents you have, you teach others and Ive never been able to do that…daddy forced me to take lessons in everything he could think of and I never use any of it for good….So then I looked down at Tee and this came out. I wrote her a song.
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”