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    The Promise

    Story written on February 12, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52074
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    Chapter 26 – My White Chocolate Mocha

    Dana: What?

    Lara: This is getting ridiculous…Just ask Shane to be your stylist.

    Dana: I dont want her to touch my hair….she might relapse and shave my head.

    Lara: Thats not funny Dane…shes your friend…she fucked up, now forgive her…you know you want to.

    Dana: If I wanted to forgive her, I would have.

    Lara: Are you this stubborn with everything, or only when youre wrong?

    Dana: Why are you taking her side? This is Shane…she ***** up everything…since when do you defend her anyway?

    Lara: I give everyone a second chance…and some people I give a third.

    Lara raised an eyebrow and walked into the Planet. Dana huffed and walked in behind her. They made their drink orders and walked over to join Alice, Tina and Shane who were sitting silently at the table.

    Shane: Hello…yeah, I know who you are kid…yeah…Im at this place called the Planet…oh …well okay…could you hurry though, I want to get to work soon….yeah, bye.

    Shane hung up her phone as Lara and Dana took a seat.

    Dana: Hey guys….uhm, whats up?

    Alice shrugged and continued to stare at her latte.

    Tina: Nothing much, how are you two?

    Dana: Fine

    Lara: Hey Alice, I know I said this before, but I really love your knew hair cut…Shane did an amazing job…and every time Ive seen you wear it a different way.

    Alice: Thanks Lara…thats nice of you

    Dana gave Lara a pissy look , which she could see form the corner of her eye. Rather than acknowledge Dana, Lara held Alices gaze until she looked over to Shane. Shane smiled and looked up from the computer screen at Alice, who blushed at Laras comment and looked over at Shane.

    Alices smile faded and she looked over at the front counter where Marina was setting out trays of food. Bette walked over from the bathroom and kissed Tina on the cheek. Tina disregarded the kiss and continued to read the magazine she had spread out before her. Jenny walked over with a tray of food. She set down a steaming cup in front of Shane and a tray of fresh cut fruit with a bowl of yogurt topped with granola.

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    1. I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.

    5. Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”

    6. Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~

    7. aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
      Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!

    9. Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)

    10. Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
      It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
      OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
      I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
      It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
      Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.

    11. LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!

    13. Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)

    15. We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.

    18. I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.

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