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    The Promise

    Story written on February 12, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 26 – My White Chocolate Mocha

    Bette closed her laptop and put it away.

    Bette: Im gonna run to the bathroom and fix my runny mascara…order me breakfast will you?

    Shane: What do you want?

    Bette: Surprise me…you know what I like (Said seductively)

    Bette hurried off to the bathroom as Alice approached the table. She caught the last few words of Bettes sentence, and it took everything she had to keep walking towards Shane. Shanes face lit up as Alice came closer. She stood up and walked over.

    Shane: Hey there sleepy head…you still pissed I woke you up?

    Alice: Kinda….

    Shane: I wanted to ask you something

    Alice: What?

    Shane: Well in keeping with the Alice Pieszecki Constitution of Acceptable Public Behavior in accordance with rule two-article B…would I be allowed to pull out your chair for you?

    Shane gave Alice a grin and wiggled her eyes. Alice rolled her eyes.

    Alice: Whatever Shane.

    Shane pulled out the chair next to her and Alice sat down, looking around while trying to avoid Shanes eye contact. Tina arrived at the table with their drinks in tow and handed one to Alice. Shane sat down and looked back and forth between Alice and Tina, both of whom wouldnt look at her.

    Shane: So….how bout those Lakers?

    Alice gave Shane a menacing look that made her sit back and shut up. Shane picked up her laptop and went to work on the music she was writing. She occasionally hummed to herself while making the painstaking attempt to use the touch pad on her laptop. Shanes phone started vibrating on the table. She looked at the caller ID. Tina looked at Alice and Alice rolled her eyes and went back to drinking her latte.

    Laura and Dana walked down the sidewalk towards the Planet. Dana was self-consciously running her hands through her hair every few steps. Lara looked at her and shook her head. Dana stopped at a car and fixed her hair in the reflection of the mirror. Lara stood behind her with her arms crossed and tapped her foot as she waited for Dana to fix her hair for the last time before they went inside. Dana turned around to an agitated Lara.

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    1. I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.

    5. Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”

    6. Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~

    7. aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
      Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!

    9. Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)

    10. Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
      It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
      OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
      I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
      It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
      Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.

    11. LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!

    13. Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)

    15. We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.

    18. I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.

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