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    The Promise

    Story written on February 12, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 26 – My White Chocolate Mocha

    Shane looked up at Bette with a What the ***** do you want expression on her face.

    Bette:…Could you possibly write the sheet music for the song…I would be able to play it….I mean I havent played in years, but I know you dont like playing for people…so if you dont mind …please?

    Shane shrugged.

    Shane: Sure …I already wrote most of the music for it already anyway.

    Bettes jaw dropped in shock.

    Bette: What!…When?

    Shane: Ha! I wrote it ten minutes ago when I read it….

    Bette: How?

    Shane: I could just hear it in my head and I can picture what it would look like on paper….I just have to it write it out now….thats how I do it…I cant just play freely though, Ive never been able to just play…I have to read sheet music, but Ive been able to just picture it in my head…if that makes sense

    Bette was ecstatic and grabbed Shane and kissed her on the cheek.

    Bette: Id really wish youd let the others see this side of you…God, I think Dane would ***** tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.

    Bette took Shanes laptop and opened one of the music programs.

    Bette: Here, I read the instructions on this one…all you have to do is click on the pallet up here that has all the notes and rests…. and look you can pick the tone, and pitch too….then it will show up down here on the lines that are already set up.

    Shane watched as Bette leaned into her.

    Shane: Okay…I still dont like the little touch pad thing…the arrow goes everywhere when I try to play solitaire…which is ten times easier with a deck of cards.

    Bette: Stop whining…. Ill get you a wireless mouse…anyway, if you actually spend your money on something and buy a keyboard, you can hook it up and just play and it will write out on the screen.

    Shane: Hey Bette….Al and Tina are here.

    They looked over at Al and Tina who were ordering drinks.

    Bette: They dont look too good.

    Shane: I think Al is pissed off cause I left early this morning to meet you.

    Bette: Just tell her after this weekend, youre all hers, Ill back off….and tell her youre helping me with something really important.

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    1. I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.

    5. Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”

    6. Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~

    7. aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
      Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!

    9. Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)

    10. Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
      It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
      OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
      I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
      It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
      Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.

    11. LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!

    13. Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)

    15. We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.

    18. I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.

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