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The Promise
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Dash loaded the dish washer and looked over at Shane smoking a cigarette on the counter. Her legs were dangling over the edge, and she stared over the edge at the floor as her hands gripped the edge of the counter.
Dash: Thanks for letting me have some wine…most people treat me like a kid whos in the way, but you dont…
Shane: Dont act like one and I wont.
Shane continued to stare at the floor.
Shane: ***** it…act like a kid…there isnt much to being an adult…if I had a chance to have a childhood Id…
Shane paused and gathered her thoughts.
Shane: …The only thing adults have are smokes, booze, a license and a vote…if I had the first two and was your age again…Id be straight…well not STRAIGHT, straight, but you know what I mean.
Shane continued to circle her heavy boots while sitting on the counter. Dash dried her hands and leaned against the dishwasher.
Dash: You love her dont you?
Shane looked up and stared deep into Dashs green eyes…past the choppy bangs, and into the pain she too held inside.
Shane: I could..and thats
Dash: Thats more than youve ever felt.
Shane nodded. She looked like a scared little kid. It set Dash at ease that when it came to the real Adult issues, they could just talk like equals….both grown up too fast, yet big kids at heart.
Dash: Where should I sleep?
Shane pushed open her bedroom door and Dash walked into the hollow living quarters that kept the light on. She looked around to see a mattress on the floor to her left. Past the mattress was a foot locker against the wall between the bed and the closet in the corner. She entered and on the other side of the door saw a long window with a window bench you could lay on and look out over the yard and into Bette and Tinas pool area.
Dash: I like it..you keep everything clean …do you have a blanket so I can..
Shane: Theres no way in ***** youll be sleeping on the floor with broken ribs. Even if you didnt, Id give you the bed and go sleep on the couch.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos