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The Promise
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Alice picked up the phone and closed it. She tossed it on the bed. She wiped the tears from her eyes and laughed to herself.
Alice: This is what it took to get you to play again huh?…more heartache?
She shook her head and laughed again as the tears continued to fall. Alice leaned back, grabbed her note pad off the night stand and wrote on the paper the first thing that popped into her head.
Do You suppose?
if youd call my name out loud
do you suppose that Id come running
do you suppose Id come at all?
Alice put down the pen and plucked at the strings while humming to herself.
Shane peeked her eyes up at Dash whose had one arm around her and another around Achilles.
Shane: Im supposed to be taking care of you.
Dash: Ehh…I suppose well just take care of each other.
Shane nodded and stood up. She reached a hand out to Dash who got up very stiff and slowly.
Shane: Whats wrong?
Dash looked away and mouthed *****
Dash: Why have you been walking like that all night?
Shane: I broke three ribs.
She lowered her head and waited for Shanes outburst.
Shane: WHAT!
Dash: Shhhh!
Dash held a finger to her mouth and looked around. Shane continued in a stressed whisper.
Shane: What!…Why didnt you say anything? He broke your ribs and Sullivan left you with..
Dash: Shane!..If I report it then they would have pulled me out of there and tossed me straight into a group home, or juvie since thats where Im really supposed to be. The only reason why Im not is cause I got into Project Promise….when something opens up thats definite, then Ill report it and move directly…
Shane: Which means well have to wait til he beats the ***** out of you again.
Dash: No, Ill stay out of his way…you said yous talk to Dylan about me getting a job, so thats less time in the house.
Dash yawned and stretched , but quickly grimaced and recoiled when the pain hit her ribs.
Shane: Lets get you in bed.
The two moved inside and cleaned up the kitchen.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos